|Reviews for Another Step Toward the Lux Aeterna|
| Justine Lark chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Nice! I actually wrote a story a couple of months ago in which Edward and Bella did touch during the movie in Biology. You have some great phrases here. I particularly like: "he can recall the days of his life when he was not unusual, electric" "he feels as if he is heading in the wrong direction" "it crawls through her system and lights her nerves"
| tehrager chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Your writing is lovely. I enjoyed it very much.
| carbrain chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
Magic. Thank you.
| lts29 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
This was simply beautiful. I loved how you took a scene from canon and made it deeper and richer. The third person was wonderful, like the camera being panned back to get at what Bella was really thinking in those moments beyond the surface.
Thank you so much for this. :)
| ScienceGeek91 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Wow..that was truly...magical. I hardly read anything apart from AH but this was just so good!
| b3j02 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Wow, I liked it...
| eye ree chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
i saw this story rec'd on the telling you like it is podcast and just came right over to read it. i loved it, it was short and sweet and just perfect and so reminiscent of the original twilight... it just made me melt into a puddle! great writing!
| CarminMoon chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
This is perhaps the shortest, most glorious, thing I have ever read.
Your words speak volumes and your imagery leaps through the screen.
Loved it. I hope you write more.
| Feisty Y. Beden chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Your descriptions practically vibrate off the page in intensity. I don't think I breathed the whole time.
| dihenydd chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I am reading this after a recommendation on the podcast Telling You How it Is. I am so glad I did. It is short but achingly beautiful. There are phrases that I could pick out but it would be wrong as it stands, complete, whole and perfest.
Thank you for sharing.
| alisa231 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I think I've reviewed this on livejournal.
But you deserve all the praise you can get. This is an absolutely beautiful piece. The writing is poetic but in a wonderfully subtle way.
The imagery is wonderful. I especially liked the bit about her hair being a 'dark bird on the pillow'.
Thank you for writing. )
| ThisColony chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
I know this isn't much in the way of a review, because I'm not feeling so incredibly articulate today.
This is just fantastic.
The imagery is so incredibly lush and perfect.
| thewasofshall chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
The visual imagery you write in this is simply amazing. The piece is short but it doesn't feel short because every word means something, expresses something, fulfills its role. I especially love this: "he feels as if he is heading in the wrong direction" because it's such a direct way to describe their relationship, especially at that part in the series when feelings are still being explored and worked out. It's breathtaking, really, realizing that things matter only because you have someone to experience with... realizing that the only home you want to go back to is living and breathing and loves you back.
| Countess Rivers chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Beautifully written. You have captured the depth of emotion really well. Thank you.
| Eve Royal chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Very cool! I liked it. It was interesting, and I really pity Edward right now. These kinds of stories always make me pity him. He's so confused... It's great!