LOL for the paperwork talk

Sound logic for why he should get Teyla :-D

Like how you did their developing friendship :-)

...And it all went downhill from there. Quite literally, in fact.

Lol perfect! I loved it!

Rodney and John are so immature, ten years old indeed! Great story!

Yeah that was funny with the shield thing. Although, if I was Sheppard I'd have shot him in the head. The things they tested were funny and I LOVED the part where Sheppard threw him off the balcony. There was a bit of a discrepancy from that episode to later however: in that one they said that the shield only works for the person who put it on first yet Lucius was able to get his initalized and both he and Sheppard could use it.

That's great!

I love tags!and I love how you write these characters. It's so nice to see these added scenes. It's like finding hidden tracks on your DVDs

Very humorous! I enjoyed reading it quite a lot.

Congrats!

Aw, I loved this! I love reading introspective fics that end up having action in them. It's great to see an expansion fill in the "shooting Rodney in the leg" scene, too.

This was my favorite line:

"Besides, if SG-1 could have Teal’c, he got Teyla."