|Reviews for The Homeless Man in the Landfill|
| xoxokiss210 chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
| JadedOne47 chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
Doh, you never wrote any more...
Hmm... i've said this to you three times today... lol
Oh, and is it just me not getting any ff updates anymore? Doh!
Anyhoo, this story had LOADS of promise, keep it up.
| iamladyliberty chapter 3 . 8/12/2009
although it's august and hot as hell outside my window, i found this christmas story to be very refreshing! please don't ever apologize for your clever, detailed writing that explores the characters and the plots that twist them. i was sad to see your author's note about people not fully appreciating this intriguing fic, and i sincerely hope that that did not cause you to stop working on it. So far, in just 3 chapters, you have managed to tug at my emotions for each of the characters and you have given such fair and generous treatment to the others, not just B&B, which so few often do. I am left wondering about cam's husband? fiance? etc. and the story there, lovelorn angela, noble volunteering hodgins, and whether sweets will be able to hold it together. but of course your treatment of the B&B nascent relationship also felt good, right, tender, and your call about brennan purposefully changing the tone to avoid a booth clam up felt dead on to me. and oh, my, to have seeley booth whispering special in one's ear before a christmas tree. m...
thanks for writing, and please know that if you ever were to pick this one up again, i'd been so pleased. thanks for sharing your talent.
| fanofbones chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
loved it...the first part was so sweet and cute
the second part was sad and made me love Sweets just a bit more...great emotional writing...
I felt for both of them...
this totally rocks...
| JapaneseAnimeFreak16 chapter 3 . 1/19/2009
this story must b continued!
| TutorGirlml chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story so far. This chapter especially was both heartwarming and bittersweet and the same time. I loved how you gave just a little more of a glimpse into Booth's childhood and how Brennan wanted to know,but tried to keep him from being embarrassed and thinking she knew at the same time. Poor Sweets. It was a good reason to give him for getting into psychology, but so sad at the same time. I'll admit that more than anything I'm anxious to see you have Hodgins and Angela rekindle some of their "old magic" as you put it in the story introduction. They're my favorite part of the show actually, so I am excited to see that in the future of the story. Thanks for the update. I liked it a lot.
| Aching Bones chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
I think that you are going at just a perfect pace...There is only so much you can do with smut, and let me be honest I love it...but to have a really nice and well written storyline through it is nicer...
'She had started to get used to the impromptu displays of affection that he would sometimes extend to her. Taking another bauble in her hand, she caught a glimpse of herself in the reflective plastic and she was surprised to see that she was smiling easily'...
It is sad that she feels she has to let on she has not understood what he really said for fear of him closing up...but I think that there will come a time when he wants her to understand everything and all it's implications...
'He released her and she watched him disappear into her kitchen, wondering how people as socially fluent as Booth or Angela would describe ‘something real’ to a girl like her'...
Love the whole idea of Lance taking the path he did and why...Lucy is definitely a chalange...probably one he has almost given up on...really looking forward to where you take it...
| LordLanceahlot chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
I loved this insight! And the Bones and Booth interaction was spot on. This is fascinating and I can't wait for an update!
| LooseSeal chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
I am quite intrigued by this story. Already it has a very different feel from most of the other work I've read. Interesting take on Sweets' background.
Looking forward to reading more!
| vballgurl23 chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
I agree, this is different than your normal one shots that you've been writing recently, but I think this is inching into Dangerous Aficionado territory, which I have to say is one of my favorite stories ever. I read it again and again!
That being said, I am very excited to see where you plan on taking this story - and I really did like the introspective into why Sweets became a therapist. This story is getting good!
| Kasper ze Chemist chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
I like the insight into the characters and now I feel really bad for Sweets...
Great job yet again and I can't wait for the smut in the next chapter.
| MickeyBoggs chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
Just started reading this and I think you've established a nice base of the story, both case-wise and in the personal lives of the characters. Looking forward to see where you take it - and those B&B moments too!
| TemporalBONES chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
Oh no she didn't! Wow, lance and Lucy...nice name combo for sure- unfortunate situation...
| SplishySplash chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
Holy intense! I mean I am a fan of the whole Sweets story... I can't see him saying Merry F* Xmas, but he could put on a brave front and what not for B/B... I love the interaction between them in the beginning
| csimesser1 chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
that was good loved it can't wait to read the next chapter