Reviews for Son of whirlpool
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14
this is definitely a wet dream of a female, this fic is shit/
NaaMaloom chapter 1 . 5/28/2023
this is dumb. I've already lost interest.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2023
For your first fanfic this is very well written
the detail is great
Guest chapter 38 . 11/27/2022
Plsssssssssss continue
fuunu chapter 4 . 9/23/2022
wow this Tsunade is such a wimp, she seems to forget she is in charge.
Roxas2456 chapter 38 . 6/15/2022
You really do have one of those rare stories that is captivating with every chapter . It has been so long since it was last updated and I truly wish you would return to finish it.
Zombiekiller666 chapter 4 . 2/3/2022
Haha this old geezer is a laugh
nylanna1105 chapter 38 . 12/22/2021
i love this kind of story .. Naruto making his own village with Hinata.. I love Naruhina ... i just finished this story and i want to read you said in you A/N things will star getting a bit more exciting.. and i'm excited to read more.. then a little shock when i saw the year it was last updated.. I hope you will pick it up and update this wonderful story.
Aedwards179 chapter 14 . 12/11/2021
what's the point of making him so fucking strong if literally nothing changes? huh? it's ridiculous.
Aedwards179 chapter 13 . 12/11/2021
what's the point of Naruto showing upto the garaa thing early if nothing changes? I'm gonna guess that chiyo still gives her life for him and Narutos identity gets found out by the others.
Aedwards179 chapter 12 . 12/11/2021
that plan to send Kai and clones after Akatsuki in the beginning is the stupidest fucking plan ever. he's sending the weakest member with 4 clones to fight the 2 strong people 2 kage level people with 1 body guard are going to escort a poisoned dude back to the Village. it should be the other way around.
Aedwards179 chapter 8 . 12/10/2021
why isn't he a Kage? every other leader is a Kage? it makes no sense for him not to be one.
Aedwards179 chapter 5 . 12/10/2021
I'm surprised it's just 4 years. you said earlier only half an hour passes in the outside world while an hour passes here. so I assumed it was going to be 6 years in there. since his original training journey was 3 years. unless the 4 years is the outside world time. and it's been 8 years training there which would make more sense. since they're getting OP af probably
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2021
When are you going to update this story? It is one of the best Naruto fanfiction stories out there but it is still on hold. Please update.
Kingkong101 chapter 38 . 8/8/2021
I guess no one had the balls to tell me why they like this story
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