Reviews for Son of whirlpool
Pal.Just.No chapter 1 . 9/27
I don't know what's the matter with the stutter of Hinata, in every fucking fic, she always stutter, i know she's shy and the like, but HELL! You really see the need to bring the shyness to the text itself? it just annoying, that why I try to kept the NaruHina storyes at the buttom of my likes... just... annoying...
Nevetx chapter 38 . 9/15
I have enjoyed this story and really hope for an update.
Pucusi chapter 38 . 9/1
This story was well written, plot was great with a twist here and there, makes a great read! However What happened to an ending? Cowboy up and let's get there friend.. Thanks for your time on your story. I enjoyed it.
sahilali06 chapter 38 . 8/17
update soon please
xYellowSagex chapter 31 . 6/22
I have read this story so many times and fall in love with it every time! All the OCs are great and the plot is so interesting. I wish this is what actually to place in the manga! This is such a great story that needs an update!
ShadowFoxKage chapter 38 . 5/3
hopefully this story will continue even though it;s been a good while since last update. please keep this going.
Nonymous chapter 38 . 3/29
It's a cool story. Plz write the next ch soon
Guest chapter 38 . 3/19
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Kenshin88 chapter 4 . 1/31
You know this is probaly one of my top 3 fanfictions i have ever read on this site. I have read your story 2 or 3 times now i hope you update again sometime in the near future
Black Hawk chapter 38 . 1/29
One of the best one I have ever read... Great work. Fantastic plot... Good writing... I really liked it... Waiting for the next chapter...
Guest chapter 30 . 12/28/2016
Your stories gay very very gay and I'm not talking about gay meaning happy I'm talking about gay you r a fag
Bloody Song chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Please update this story!
Me chapter 24 . 8/20/2016
wow! good fanfic, i love everything you've done to the storm village. Now i can say i know how to found a village
Guest chapter 38 . 8/11/2016
Easily one of the best fics I have had the pleasure of reading
Hope you'll update soon
IFRITE chapter 38 . 7/28/2016
Great story! Usually, I don't really like to see many major OCs in fanfics, but I have to say the major characters of this story were all well-developed and I totally enjoy the plot. Thank you for the story and I really hope it will continue, especially since it has come all the way to this point already!
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