Reviews for Son of whirlpool
Guest chapter 38 . 3/23
Update please
SinfulPride chapter 16 . 1/24
Naruto isn't fighting like Master Kyosh taught him at all. He is flaunting his power exactly opposite what he was taught. He sneaks up on everyone, but he never takes advantage of it. He draws the fights out too long.
LookingSoFly chapter 11 . 12/4/2017
Just a tad to much sakura bashing but its a great story non the less
Hmason chapter 38 . 11/12/2017
love the story hope you finish it
Pal.Just.No chapter 1 . 9/27/2017
I don't know what's the matter with the stutter of Hinata, in every fucking fic, she always stutter, i know she's shy and the like, but HELL! You really see the need to bring the shyness to the text itself? it just annoying, that why I try to kept the NaruHina storyes at the buttom of my likes... just... annoying...
Nevetx chapter 38 . 9/15/2017
I have enjoyed this story and really hope for an update.
Pucusi chapter 38 . 9/1/2017
This story was well written, plot was great with a twist here and there, makes a great read! However What happened to an ending? Cowboy up and let's get there friend.. Thanks for your time on your story. I enjoyed it.
sahilali06 chapter 38 . 8/17/2017
update soon please
YellowSage chapter 31 . 6/22/2017
I have read this story so many times and fall in love with it every time! All the OCs are great and the plot is so interesting. I wish this is what actually to place in the manga! This is such a great story that needs an update!
ShadowFoxKage chapter 38 . 5/3/2017
hopefully this story will continue even though it;s been a good while since last update. please keep this going.
Nonymous chapter 38 . 3/29/2017
It's a cool story. Plz write the next ch soon
Guest chapter 38 . 3/19/2017
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Kenshin88 chapter 4 . 1/31/2017
You know this is probaly one of my top 3 fanfictions i have ever read on this site. I have read your story 2 or 3 times now i hope you update again sometime in the near future
Black Hawk chapter 38 . 1/29/2017
One of the best one I have ever read... Great work. Fantastic plot... Good writing... I really liked it... Waiting for the next chapter...
Guest chapter 30 . 12/28/2016
Your stories gay very very gay and I'm not talking about gay meaning happy I'm talking about gay you r a fag
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