Could not get past chapter 8. I respect anyone who writes a story. It takes talent and imagination and perseverance. You should be commended it is something I cannot do. That being said, the reason I can't read more is the reason why so many stories fail to capture a wide audience. Here Naruto is godlike, no struggle no hardships, no flaws, becomes a genius overnight. Naruto is an idiot savant, he is endearing because he is clueless at times, lovable because he never gives up and has and idealized view of the world he wants to live in. Why did his master train him? Just ran into them by chance and decided to make SSS heroes out of them. No run up no hook into why or how. Take people off the streets and make them S class shinobi with a month of training. Dialogue to cliche and monotone. You know all of this is true. I hope really really hope and I know you will improve. Never give up and please don't take this as a flame or mean. I hope it sparks a little thought in your writing and results in continue fabulous stories. I look forward to them and much much more from you.

this is definitely a wet dream of a female, this fic is shit/

this is dumb. I've already lost interest.

For your first fanfic this is very well written
the detail is great

Plsssssssssss continue

wow this Tsunade is such a wimp, she seems to forget she is in charge.

You really do have one of those rare stories that is captivating with every chapter . It has been so long since it was last updated and I truly wish you would return to finish it.

Haha this old geezer is a laugh

i love this kind of story .. Naruto making his own village with Hinata.. I love Naruhina ... i just finished this story and i want to read more...as you said in you A/N things will star getting a bit more exciting.. and i'm excited to read more.. then a little shock when i saw the year it was last updated.. I hope you will pick it up and update this wonderful story.

what's the point of making him so fucking strong if literally nothing changes? huh? it's ridiculous.

what's the point of Naruto showing upto the garaa thing early if nothing changes? I'm gonna guess that chiyo still gives her life for him and Narutos identity gets found out by the others.

that plan to send Kai and clones after Akatsuki in the beginning is the stupidest fucking plan ever. he's sending the weakest member with 4 clones to fight the 2 strong people 2 kage level people with 1 body guard are going to escort a poisoned dude back to the Village. it should be the other way around.

why isn't he a Kage? every other leader is a Kage? it makes no sense for him not to be one.

I'm surprised it's just 4 years. you said earlier only half an hour passes in the outside world while an hour passes here. so I assumed it was going to be 6 years in there. since his original training journey was 3 years. unless the 4 years is the outside world time. and it's been 8 years training there which would make more sense. since they're getting OP af probably

When are you going to update this story? It is one of the best Naruto fanfiction stories out there but it is still on hold. Please update.