Reviews for Son of whirlpool |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Though a somewhat generic plotline, you make it anything but common. A good writing style and enjoyable OC's also help to add to the story. dialogue though is in a little need of work, but other than that no complaints. Keep writing, as you can see people are looking forward to this. Burning Frost (previously Janzo the Ashbringer). |
![]() ![]() ![]() both: cool, nice chap, u have update...soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very good story keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is awsome good plot original ideas good grammer what else could a story have. :D plz continue very soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() lil:GR WAT THE HELL spring:CLIFFHANGER U GOT 2 B KIDDING ME lil:wah no fair no fair spring:hurry and update both: THE STORYS FRIDDGEN AWSOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good start. Just enough to hook a person and not enought to give too much away. I see that Ino is going to be "troublesome", but I can't tell about Sakura. Though she wants Sasuke back she doesn't curse Naruto's existance like in other stories when she bad. Also a not totaly evil Sasuke? How rare. Nice, but rare. |
![]() ![]() ![]() both:*GLOMPS U* OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, WE LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN PLZ UPDATE SO GOOD MUS READ MORE! UPDATE...NOW |
![]() ![]() Good start to a story. Hope to see another chapter posted before to long. Looking forward to seeing more of your OC Kira. My guess is that her family was a victim in the Mist's Kekkei Genkai (spelling?) purges. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A solid start to a story with potential. The last part was a bit disappointing but it wasn't too bad. |