Reviews for Son of whirlpool
Burning Frost chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Though a somewhat generic plotline, you make it anything but common. A good writing style and enjoyable OC's also help to add to the story. dialogue though is in a little need of work, but other than that no complaints. Keep writing, as you can see people are looking forward to this.

Burning Frost (previously Janzo the Ashbringer).
readingandrelaxing chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
both: cool, nice chap, u have update...soon
beast keeper 9 chapter 2 . 12/24/2008
this is a very good story keep it up
Phrozen07 chapter 2 . 12/23/2008
this is awsome good plot original ideas good grammer what else could a story have. :D plz continue very soon
readingandrelaxing chapter 2 . 12/23/2008
lil:GR WAT THE HELL

spring:CLIFFHANGER U GOT 2 B KIDDING ME

lil:wah no fair no fair

spring:hurry and update

both: THE STORYS FRIDDGEN AWSOME
Enigmatic Igor chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
A good start. Just enough to hook a person and not enought to give too much away.

I see that Ino is going to be "troublesome", but I can't tell about Sakura. Though she wants Sasuke back she doesn't curse Naruto's existance like in other stories when she bad. Also a not totaly evil Sasuke? How rare. Nice, but rare.
readingandrelaxing chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
both:*GLOMPS U* OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, WE LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN PLZ UPDATE SO GOOD MUS READ MORE! UPDATE...NOW
KC chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Good start to a story. Hope to see another chapter posted before to long. Looking forward to seeing more of your OC Kira. My guess is that her family was a victim in the Mist's Kekkei Genkai (spelling?) purges.
top chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
A solid start to a story with potential. The last part was a bit disappointing but it wasn't too bad.
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