| Reviews for Son of whirlpool |
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   Burning Frost chapter 3 . 1/5/2009 Though a somewhat generic plotline, you make it anything but common. A good writing style and enjoyable OC's also help to add to the story. dialogue though is in a little need of work, but other than that no complaints. Keep writing, as you can see people are looking forward to this. Burning Frost (previously Janzo the Ashbringer). |
| readingandrelaxing chapter 3 . 1/3/2009 both: cool, nice chap, u have update...soon |
| beast keeper 9 chapter 2 . 12/24/2008 this is a very good story keep it up |
| Phrozen07 chapter 2 . 12/23/2008 this is awsome good plot original ideas good grammer what else could a story have. :D plz continue very soon |
| readingandrelaxing chapter 2 . 12/23/2008 lil:GR WAT THE HELL spring:CLIFFHANGER U GOT 2 B KIDDING ME lil:wah no fair no fair spring:hurry and update both: THE STORYS FRIDDGEN AWSOME |
| Enigmatic Igor chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 A good start. Just enough to hook a person and not enought to give too much away. I see that Ino is going to be "troublesome", but I can't tell about Sakura. Though she wants Sasuke back she doesn't curse Naruto's existance like in other stories when she bad. Also a not totaly evil Sasuke? How rare. Nice, but rare. |
| readingandrelaxing chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 both:*GLOMPS U* OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG, WE LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN PLZ UPDATE SO GOOD MUS READ MORE! UPDATE...NOW |
| KC chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 Good start to a story. Hope to see another chapter posted before to long. Looking forward to seeing more of your OC Kira. My guess is that her family was a victim in the Mist's Kekkei Genkai (spelling?) purges. |
| top chapter 1 . 12/6/2008 A solid start to a story with potential. The last part was a bit disappointing but it wasn't too bad. |