Reviews for Son of whirlpool
Reichenfaust chapter 4 . 4/25/2015
Ninpou:Kagesochi eh? That really reminds me of Ninja Scroll... I think that's what you might be going for...

What Kishimoto forgot is that he was writing a story about freakin Ninjas, who would constantly train, and strive to improve, regardless of their background...

I really hope this gets updated.
Hello chapter 38 . 4/22/2015
Hey! This is an awesome fanfic, but you haven't updated for a year! Where are you mr writer?
WJMDragonRider chapter 38 . 4/11/2015
this has been a most enjoyable story, please continue it or try to get it adopted if you can not finish.
Guest chapter 38 . 4/6/2015
This story is amazing! I hope you post another chapter soon!
ghostalker15 chapter 30 . 3/15/2015
This is a well written and exceptional piece with an engrossing plot. There are a few spelling errors and grammatical errors, but aside from those there haven't been any major inconsistencies that I have noticed. One that I am unsure of is the fact that in Chapter 9 you very distinctly note Raizoku Tsubaki as one of the Juryuu no Arashi, and towards the end of Chapter 30 you also name her as the Jonin commander of the general ninja squads. From the way the village is set up so far, no one leader of any division is part of the Juryuu no Arashi. Is it a different Raizoku Tsubaki, or just an honest mistake and there is another character that should have been named as the Jonin commander? Also initially, there was no general unit/division originally either. When was the division added? Once again, a well written story with a solid plot, but there are still a few conflicting portions and missing pieces of information. I hope you update soon!
freak over anime1999 chapter 38 . 3/9/2015
An update would be highly appreciated. Thank you.
shin chapter 38 . 1/31/2015
Update please...
My heart is beating so hard becouse your fic..
i might have heart attect becouse you dont continue this great of masterpiece fic..
Please ... ... ...
Guest chapter 38 . 1/16/2015
Is there going to be an update to this story any time soon?
bigfan22 chapter 38 . 1/13/2015
The best way I can describe this story is...WOW. Despite the wonderful length, the plot and characters were so engrossing, that I read through it all in a day. Not only is this a well written fic, but I absolutely love the village Naruto and Hinata have created. Now that the fourth Shinobi was is about to win, it looks like the Elemental Nations will now see the true power of Naruto and the Storm. Absolutely great job so far, and I can't wait until the next update.
creativesm75 chapter 38 . 1/13/2015
CreativeMindAtWorkHere chapter 38 . 1/11/2015
I really enjoy reading this story. Are you planning on continuing?
Guest chapter 38 . 1/5/2015
Superbly written! Thanks for the journey. Hope that you would continue writing and that there is an update
Guest chapter 37 . 1/5/2015
Ehh? Thought it was going to be some trap.
alteristkang chapter 33 . 1/4/2015
Nice. Thank you
Guest chapter 32 . 1/1/2015
Superb so. Far
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