| Reviews for Son of whirlpool |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 12/31/2014 Awesome. Wish there was update |
 Reichenfaust chapter 38 . 12/31/2014 This story is wicked cool. I really like the incorporation of ancient ninja technique's, and the oc Jinta Kyosh. It was really cool how you had them trained, how they built the village, how the Akatsuki have retaliated, and how the story has progressed. The only things of note I wanted to say, was it is dumb to make Naruto still use the Kyuubi's chakra while fighting Orochimaru. Didn't you say he was SSS Rank? There was no need for that to happen. I did like how Kakashi did help him with the Rasengan, and with the way his training went I can actually understand him never completing it while under Jinta. The other thing, was the Zombie bros beating Kirabi. He would have just gone Full-Bijuu, and squashed Hidan into paste, the same with Kakuzu, because even if Kakuzu is made of rag doll strings. He still has his hearts, organs, and brains. Kakuzu never had a technique that could match Amaterasu. Which was the only reason Sasuke 'defeated' Kirabi originally. The only other match would be Kisame because of his stupid gamebreaking chakra absorption from both Samehada, and the Thousand Feeding Sharks, or Giant Sharkbomb. Which can only be overpowered by brute force. Besides that though, everything else is awesome, the integration of new ninja into the village, the idea of the multiple departments and ten dragons(would be wicked if their symbol was the mortal kombat Dragon), which reminds me of the Seireitei in Bleach. The fights with Guren was cool, and I was really happy to see Hinata defeat Kisame, and Jiraiya was saved. Looking forward to more, cheers, Reichenfaust. |
| alteristkang chapter 10 . 12/31/2014 WoW ! |
| alteristkang chapter 9 . 12/31/2014 Very good. Though it's a bit hard to catch up with the OC's |
| alteristkang chapter 8 . 12/30/2014 So far so good |
| alteristkang chapter 7 . 12/30/2014 Nice chapter! |
| alteristkang chapter 6 . 12/30/2014 Woohoo! Cheat Character |
| alteristkang chapter 5 . 12/30/2014 Super! |
| alteristkang chapter 4 . 12/30/2014 Nice. Looks hardcore. And the time warp in the mountain is cheating |
| alteristkang chapter 3 . 12/30/2014 Woo...OC. I thought he was Jiraiya in some henge/disguise |
| alteristkang chapter 2 . 12/30/2014 If I was Naruto. I would be so very pissed. Nice so far. Thanks |
| alteristkang chapter 1 . 12/30/2014 Sheesh. Such a sad ending...Ohh.. The story just started? Haha. Nice start I mean |
| reader chapter 38 . 12/15/2014 update |
| Guest chapter 38 . 12/7/2014 great please continue |
| Guest chapter 36 . 12/7/2014 great |