Reviews for Son of whirlpool |
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![]() ![]() When is the next chapter... Please... |
![]() ![]() Pleaze continue awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe that you do not understand the reason that Guy and Lee use weights. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This truly an amazing fix please continue your outstanding work thank you very much |
![]() ![]() I stopped reading right here. Naruto leaves Kabuto alive after maiming him just so you can keep the character around is the last straw. If you are going to power up your characters like you did then live with it and make a believable story around them rather than you such pathetic devices to move your plot along. You had Naruto trained as supposedly a true ninja and now you have him leave an enemy alive for no stated reason? This fic has great ideas but poor execution. |
![]() ![]() Is this going to just continue to be one info dump after another? Some is understandable but every chapter giant info dumps keep interrupting the story. After 11 chapters that's a big writing problem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I've gotten so engrossed in your story I haven't had time to review. On the bright side, there hasn't been as many errors to point out, which is my usual reason to review. But that's not why I'm reviewing this time. I was amused so much by the scene where Naruto catches Hinata using shadow clones to do paperwork snot flew out my nose. Hoping to see more such scenes in the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, this is a such a great story, why aren't you going through it with spellcheck? It would be so much better. |
![]() ![]() Dude you should have naruto send some of his juryuu to the five kages you know as should go to kumo cause he helped rescue bee but unlike mataza he is very polite and respectful so A won't get mad. Mataza should go to kiri cuz he is from there, he's a bloodline user like mei, and he is very complimentary to beautiful people so he and mei will get along swimmingly. Also mira should be sent back to iwa just to mess with onooki.*evil smirk, and twirls moustache* mwahahahahaha |
![]() ![]() Dude this story is awesome. If you need ideas for future chapters how about you make naruto head of the shinobi have him send some of his juryyu to escort the five kages like tenoko for A because he's so polite that he wont offend him and mataza for mei because he likes beauty and he's from kiri (and mira for onooki just to mess with him *evil smirk*) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curious data: Kakashi once told Naruto that he had four times his chakra, but if he weren't holding Kyuubi, he would have a hundred times his chakra. In other words, 96% of Naruto's chakra is being used to maintain the seal and his high chakra capacity is ALL him! *smirks evily* |
![]() ![]() ![]() lookin forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() why is it every story i read lately hasn't been updated in over half a year... i love this story but it needs an ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the most EPIC fic on . Drama, adventure, suspence, hurt/comfort and little of romance and most of all its NaruHina is there in this fic. I like it very much. If possible I would like to read your further chapters. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 7 months and no updates come on this story is really good. If you don't update soon a lot of people are going to assume you've abandoned the story or quit the site and stop following/favorting the story |