Somehow i feel like this goes against many things that naruto stands for..
300 dead and he sends their heads to the tsuchikage.. It may seem like a scare tactic but things like these only build more grudge and resentment..

O hell yes 4th ninja war and the Storm is going to show that bastard Madara/Obito (who ever you want to call him) why you should not stand against them.

Can't wait for the summit when they talk about what to do with the remaining jinchuuriki some how I think they are going to have a hard time getting the Storm village to agree with them.

Looking for to next update please be soon.

Awesome story man.. sad u havent updated in a while just when things started to get interesting.. But awesome portrayal of naruto and hinata.

pls update nice story well written really enjoyed it

I found your story and I loved it! From the moment I started reading it I couldn't stop. I know it's been almost 2 years since you last updated the next chapter but I really hope that you continue this wonderful story. I am looking to a we what happens.

wow... Umm that was painful to read.
Having a painfully ignorant main character can be amusing and cute in a tv show or a movie, not in a book - when you're watching a movie you can just watch, but when you're reading, more often than not, the reader will place themselves in the position of the character, they will be reading that characters thoughts... and no one wants to be stupid.
So instead of immersing ourselves in the story we stand back and are disgusted by the characters stupidity.
I don't know for certain, because I'm not going to subject myself to reading that again to check, but just having read this chapter once, there are a large number of disconnects and mistakes, things that change from one scene to the next that shouldn't... like initially the old man threatens Naruto's life if he fails the test, and threatens the girls lives if he doesn't even try - later you make it seem as if it's the other way around...
Also the wise old man that knows everything and will take the young ignorant orphan boy under his wing is so so SOOOO over used that it hurts. Good authors of children's stories like J. K. Rowling and (though it pains me to put him in this category) Christopher Paolini, can get away with it. Second rate, poorly edited authors such as yourself cannot.
And wow was this a scathing review... Take it how it was meant - in hopes that you can improve yourself in the future - I only ever review stories that I like at least a bit, and I'm only ever so scathing when I'm disappointed because I thought the story could really have been great.

This is my favorite Naruto stories, I wish you or someone else would finish this amazing story please!

Excellent plot and storyline

this is a really good story well done.

great story, I wanted to ask if this has been abandoned?

interesting story and i hope there is an update soon

dun dun good no great

liked the ending paragraph, a fantastic way to wrap another chapter. keep up the good work :-)

Please update this story because so far this is THE BEST Naruto fiction story I have ever read with all the interesting plot and the twist I even think that this is better the canon Naruto

Are you still going to continue this story?