Naruto isn't fighting like Master Kyosh taught him at all. He is flaunting his power exactly opposite what he was taught. He sneaks up on everyone, but he never takes advantage of it. He draws the fights out too long.

Just a tad to much sakura bashing but its a great story non the less

love the story hope you finish it

I don't know what's the matter with the stutter of Hinata, in every fucking fic, she always stutter, i know she's shy and the like, but HELL! You really see the need to bring the shyness to the text itself? it just annoying, that why I try to kept the NaruHina storyes at the buttom of my likes... just... annoying...

I have enjoyed this story and really hope for an update.

This story was well written, plot was great with a twist here and there, makes a great read! However What happened to an ending? Cowboy up and let's get there friend.. Thanks for your time on your story. I enjoyed it.

I have read this story so many times and fall in love with it every time! All the OCs are great and the plot is so interesting. I wish this is what actually to place in the manga! This is such a great story that needs an update!

hopefully this story will continue even though it;s been a good while since last update. please keep this going.

It's a cool story. Plz write the next ch soon

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You know this is probaly one of my top 3 fanfictions i have ever read on this site. I have read your story 2 or 3 times now i hope you update again sometime in the near future

One of the best one I have ever read... Great work. Fantastic plot... Good writing... I really liked it... Waiting for the next chapter...

Your stories gay very very gay and I'm not talking about gay meaning happy I'm talking about gay you r a fag

Please update this story!