Reviews for Son of whirlpool |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good keep the chapters coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep updating this story is amazing |
![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() Interesting change to the original series. Still the most difficult problem is the one you share with most writers. It is the ability to keep readers riveted to every word, phrase, paragraph and page. Honestly those who manage to do this are rare and should honestly be considered an art form. Still even though you have these problems it is still a very good story with a compelling story to tell. Still its sad that you haven't updated since 2014 but things happen. |
![]() ![]() This is amazing can't wait to find out what is about to happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow a really good fic I must admit. This story has a great potential though like a lot of good story it happened to be unfinished. I was really liking this story. Even though you have repeatedly told to never abandon the story,I highly doubt it now for its been two years since your last update and you have no news. If it ever got update I will be glad to read it and review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it bro pleas3 update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the story i hope the that you update real soon cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() Rule in this Fanfic. .Pause for effect when revealing something cool |
![]() ![]() This may sound weird but some of the sayings here guided me to becoming a valedictorian, so thank you, This means a lot from me. Again thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() great seriers, would love to see it keep going..., on the other i previous chapters u have a tons of grammar mistakes (hear instead of here, I orders... mine orders, etc.) |