Reviews for An Apple a Day
Daevanam Daevo chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Miss Mayinga chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
"This is rape, you know. I can call the police on you." "Because you always threaten me not to." "Stop it!"




I mean, I can (kind of) get the whole "ravishment" thing. But actually calling it rape, and then continuing to treat it like run-of-the-mill consensual porn (Not even touching the whole "women are so cute when they're mad" bits)... that's just disturbing. And not in the good, darkfic kind of way, either. If you want to write rape, write rape, and if you want to write consent, write consent, but don't write rape and and then act like it's consensual.

*This has been a public service announcement from the Department of Why The Fuck Do I Even Have To Explain This*
Maiden of the Moon chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
One of the most chilling, disturbing, in character, and wonderfully-horrible pieces of NeuroxYako smut ever. I love you.
Sessho's Lover chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Cute story. I liked it.
SoulessxWarrior chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Nice story. :D I love this story line~ *coughcough* ./. I hope you write more!~
Sailor Leo chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
It's everything that an M rated NeuroYako should be, and I love it!
Lokashi chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
OMG, That was amazing. I love your use of detail. And you kept the so in character! It was absolutely amazing! Think there is any chance of you writing one where he actually has sex with her? I think it would be very successful. But that is just my opinion. Keep up the good work!
Irish leprechaun chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
*Blushes* You really managed to keep him in character!

My dirty mind loved it xD

Five stars?

I think so. :]