|Reviews for In Jupitus' Shadow|
| missxbrightside chapter 23 . 8/6/2013
I absolutely loved this. Best Reaver fan fic ever! I couldn't stop reading. I want more! 3
| MareofAsgard chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Hey, i've been reading your story In Jupitus' Shadow. Absolutely love it. Though I wonder what caused you to give Reaver blonde hair. -shrugs- It's no big matter to me, you've done way too good a job pinning his personality for me to be mad. xD Anyways, noticed you haven't updated in quite some time, (Years)and I just finished reading what you have so far. I do hope you choose to get back to this fanfic. I'm just ITCHING to see what happens next.
| Lightning Rays chapter 23 . 3/14/2012
This story is amazing! I read it a bunch of times and I love it. You're an amazing writer and please write more! And here's your 100 review :D
| MissOblivion chapter 23 . 11/11/2011
This is so amazing! I absolutely love it! Please, please, please continue!
| tsukiomi chapter 23 . 8/2/2011
Update! Uve got something really great going on here! Although one correction that has been bugging me through the entire story, reaver doesn't have blond hair. Its dark brown if almost black...
| Vardie chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
A well-written, cunning story. That's a real shame it hasn't been updated for such a long time :(
| Boo chapter 23 . 1/17/2011
What was your ability build for Sparrow? She seems seriously underpowered. The plot devices are most commonly found in light paperback romances. The main plot development moves at a snails' pace. There needs to be more focus on plot advancement and less psychological narrative. See bad guy, shoot/fireball/dismember bad guy. If Sparrow emoted at every baddie she would have been really most sincerely dead long ago.
| unread chapter 23 . 11/15/2010
Read the whole story and absolutely loved it. Well written and nerve-wracking! I enjoyed every last word of it. I'll always be happily waiting for the next chapter. Consider me a lifelong fan!
| Jessica920 chapter 23 . 4/27/2010
omg ! AMAZING! you r realy talented i loved all of it , hope the new chapter will be up son! x
| The Black Muse chapter 20 . 2/9/2010
Excellent story and brilliant concept for a plotline. Sparrow and Reaver is my favorite shipping for Fable 2. I have only one complaint about some tiny spelling mistakes. Please try to fix that. Other then that excellent story please update soon.
| Crazed-Authoress chapter 23 . 1/2/2010
Oh my gosh, you must update! I'm loving the Sparrow/Reaver!
| Hunter.48 chapter 23 . 12/23/2009
The story just got alot creepier D: and i'm wonderin, is Sparrow ever gonna find out about that little bet that Reaver and Garth made? X3 Robin and Sparrow? :) Very nice
| Millix chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
I found various puntuation mistakes and one example of redundancy, but don't let that discourage you from finishing. Press on!
| phoenix revenant chapter 23 . 8/28/2009
I really do love your ability to expand upon the canon universe. The attention to detail of other cultures is wonderful, and I'm excited to find out what happens next! Don't stress about getting the story out, especially if you've got more pressing matters to take care of first. :]
| Kitkatinahat chapter 23 . 8/26/2009
Oh just take you're time hun. No need to hurry something and be upset with it. Also, I liked this chapter a lot. Nice touch with Adren just wanting to kill for no reason at all other than the fact that he would enjoy it. -Love's those types of villians-