Reviews for YuGiOh! Avatar: Secrets of the Pharaoh
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Where's Capsule monster arc?
UltimateGundamFighter chapter 5 . 10/25/2016
And this awesome series ends...unfinished...well...Okay...
Greymon Leader Batx flashpoint chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
Hey just wondering when is the next chapter?
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I really hope you update this soon! ! I miss this series! ! ! !
Guest chapter 5 . 2/26/2010
can you update this story again? i want to know how the series ended.
mfmxxx chapter 5 . 2/4/2010
When Tea goes to visit Atem before his duel with Yugi, are you going to convert that scene to bring out the Yugi x Tea pairing?

Also, Gx sequel would be cool with Alexis/Atticus being different and maybe adding a twist to Judai?

In the Dungeion Dice Monsters, you said about Atems relationship with the Dark Magician and the DMG was strong, or something along those lines, will you be exploring that? It would be cool to see some Yugi / Mana interaction.

Hoping Yugi has a bigger role in this than he did the anime.
kilnorc chapter 5 . 12/12/2009
ooh, nice turn of events! can't wait to see the next one man
SulliMike23 chapter 5 . 12/11/2009
So THIS is how we meet Ananzu. This Captain Ansif is beginning to irk me though.
The Duelist of Dawn chapter 5 . 12/11/2009
Ah, you made Ananzu like Kisara, a girl who struggled to survive. I was wondering how she started. The chapter's great dude, I await your next update.
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 5 . 12/11/2009
Okay, I DO NOT like this Captain Ansif! Something is telling me that he wants the Millennium Items for himself... or maybe... *gasps* is he a spy for Bakura? Oh no! Don't listen to a word he says Mahad!

Why were Mahad and Isis meeting in the courtyard? I always sensed something between them in the show. Are they in love? *looks away with dreamy look in eyes* That would be SO romantic!

And speaking of love... is Yami falling in love with Ananzu? And if she isn't the Maiden that Dartz told him about... then... who is? I kinda have an idea who it is but I can't spoil it for everyone else!

EXCELLENT JOB on this chapter! Good luck with the next one, hope you update soon, and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
kilnorc chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
awesome chapter dude! liked how you used the ref of Alexander the Great, given that little Capsule Monster bit that actually has the guy, if memory serves's been awhile since I actually saw any Yu-Gi-Oh! hehe

but anyway, great chapter man!
SulliMike23 chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
Nice to know you're still working on this. I'm anxious to see more.
Atem's Sister Atea chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
This was AWESOME! You did an EXCELLENT JOB! But you made a few mistakes with the names.

1) The person who wields Scales is called Karim, not Khalim.

2) Eye-holder's name is Aknadin.

3) Isis' monster is called Spiria, not Spheria.

Hope this helps!

What is Kisara carrying? *thinks for a minute* Oh... my... Ra. She can't be. No way! That would be totally freaky! I'm not spoiling it, but I think I know what's in that pouch!

And when are we going to see Ananzu? She's the original Avatar right? I can't wait to see her!

Good luck with the next chapter, and I hope you update soon!
The Duelist of Dawn chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
This is heating up! And if I never said this out loud, here it is: I hate Diabound!

Anyway great chapter, glad to see you working on chapters again!
Rc1212 chapter 3 . 10/17/2009
GREAT! I was worried you weren't going to write the series anymore. Can't wait for more!
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