Reviews for Ardor
xXTheDragonRiderXx chapter 1 . 5/21
Oh, my favorite was definitely the drive one. There's something compelling about it. The strength one is awesome too- I can just see Aang trying to do something stupid (like trying to touch Toph's hair) and she just turns to him and says, "Don't even think about it." xDDDD Oooh, and the Gravity! That's awesome too~ I think that is the essence of their relationship, she keeps him grounded while he lifts her up.

Actually, I was wondering if I could include that and the Drive one in my fic, Strength of Spirit, sometime? /it's not posted yet but it will be... after I finish outlining it. . I'll give credit, of course! ...Please? Pretty please? With cherries on top? *puppy eyes*
kaerfratiug chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
this is awesome! im not a big fan of the whole 50sentence thing, but i really, really loved this. it was good, with a nice sense of humor while still keeping things T. awesome work :)
TaangtasticXD chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Invader Rachel chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
i loved it!
leDeluge chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Each sentence told an unforgettable story and I have never felt so much love from a fiction like this. Please keep writing Taang! I feel like you know them so well and that is something so rare.

My favorite sentence would have to be the one where Aang names his son Gyatso. It touched my heart and I honestly smiled reading it.

Thank you!
jellyjay chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Ooh, some of those are *hot* XD

Good work - Much love for that last one.
imotel chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
that was great, made me laugh so many times. i really enjoyed it.
Ladyluck523 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
That was a fun read! :)

I enjoyed them all especially this one (it made me laugh for several minutes):


It was often wondered who was more powerful: The Avatar, who could control all four elements, or his Earthbending Mistress, who could make him cower with a look.

LOL matter how powerful you are, you are still only human and subject to normal human interactions. :)

Plus, making him cower is just Toph being Toph LOL.

I didn't mind the 'risque' ones. Sex is a very human way to connect to someone.

Great job and I hope this inspires more Taang!
Rose Gilmore chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
that was awesome.

A very perfect break from my rosalie/emmett and jacob/leah fic binge.

yay avatar!

I loved it all, and loved esp. the part about being reincarnated in pairs, it was melancholy but sweet :D
aeriedescent chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Haha, I don't think I screamed "OMG MY VIRGIN EYES!" to any of them.

I liked them all actually, really well written. I especially liked them because Taang is my favorite pairing of the moment. Great stories!

jayma chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I commented on LJ, but I'll comment again! _ Totally enjoyed it! Taang FTW!
Isis the Sphinx chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
It's too late for my eyes, read too many M ratings...

This one had me smirking through most of it. Really liked it. More please. Keep writing!
Brother Grimm chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
very nice i love reading thies they are entertaining