Reviews for Wishlist
Cathrinee chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
I thought the ending was sweet. Well written story :)
A reader of twilight chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Oh wow, this is amazing, thank you so much! I think the auther led up to them having sex in the books way to much. And then she had to just fade out while they were doing it. I felt like I was reading pages from the books! This was awesome! Nice work! :3
Kasa15 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
sophie921 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
I liked the style you used with the count-down and the short dialogue. It was snappy and cute.

Christmas at the Cullens was just right, too, noting Edward's penchant for spoiling his loved ones.

midtwimom chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I'm just discovering your writing...and you fill in Meyer's blank spaces staying true to the characters and in great taste as well.
PetChicken chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
What a beautiful story! I loved the way you led up to "the big night" and I laughed about the vibrator present..bahahaha.. great job!
bellaandedwardlove chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
god, i wish my boyfriend was that generous to me!

edward cullen really just outdoes every man, doesn't he *sighs*

i love this story :)
deleted44444444444444 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
hehehehehee i love one shots D
coxie chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
"I meant my self-control as a man, not as a vampire." Guh...that just made my panties melt.

Just brilliant!
Tater-K chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
loved this!
Twilitr1604 chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Very, very nice! One of the best one-shots I've ever read.
vous etes belle chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Is that it?
CB chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
AW that was really sweet

How do you write like that?

you completely capture your reader!

it's awsome!
September-Sapphire chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
GREAT story. I love the snapshots with those witty quips between Bella and Edward. Letting the reader fill in the blanks is interesting and enjoyable. Bravo!
OneEclecticMess chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Very good. Love your writing.
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