Reviews for Neurosis
lady yumi aiko kumiko chapter 3 . 11/10/2015
I do hope you have lots of inspiration to write more on this story arc-buffy/kirill/nikolai. Really loved it. That and all your stories. You had me at Kore then its one delightful ride after another masterfully ending with your lotr series. Ive been crossing my fingers that your muse wakes up refreshed, brimming chockfuls of inspiration so you can write again. Thanks so much for sharing this!
yoyoente chapter 3 . 4/26/2010
GAH! You haven't updated this in like two's sad, because I think this has lots of potential.

I hope your muse starts smacking you over the head with some ideas.
whirleeq chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
The first two chapters were interesting; the third confusing, unless you are trying to slip in another crossover without specifically stating it. It would have been better if you had gone with the House/Buffy meeting, after all that was the hook with this story, rather than reminiscing with some OC.
mindwrung chapter 3 . 12/16/2008
Love it! fabulous, as always ]
Ensei chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
21st review! w00t! I love your stories and only found out about you a day ago, but I'd like to request any continuation of the Buffy and russian guy theme (either Bourne Supremacy and/or Eastern Promises) if that's okay. Thanks. Happy writing.
torotoro chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
Great story, please keep writing. I like how you incorporate the other series/stories.
TTrunks chapter 3 . 12/12/2008
Excellent, I don't know why everyone has House with "bad" guys, but I'm interested to see how it plays out. I kind of want to hear/see whatever House and Buffy's meeting.
Princesakarlita411 chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
nice intriguing
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Roxie156 chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
I'm ao glad you're back! yet another great start to a story. I love your writing and once again, you've captured every character's personality to a T. I'm looking forward to more soon and hopefully (crosses fingers) some updates on some of your other amazing stories.
Firewolfe chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
I love these cross overs with Buffy being with the Russian. Nicely done. More soon I hope. I do hope you redeem the bad guy though.

Gamine Madcap chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
Okay...I'm still trying to figure out how all the mob people fit together. And how Buffy fits in with the mob people. I understand suspense, but be careful how long you go with the random chunks of information. For example, you completely skipped over Buffy's meeting with House (which I'm assuming you're going to come back to later) but that's what the first two chapters had been building up to. So it skip it entirely for a secondary plot line really jars the reader. I really love your writing style, just be careful-it can be hard to get into a story when you have to keep going back to previous chapters and try to figure out how everything pieces together. Other than that, keep up the great work and update soon!
teaonthestairs chapter 3 . 12/11/2008
This is very captivating! Love the weaving in of the backstory and the narrative in this chapter! So well done! I can't wait for more!
Emerald Cloud chapter 3 . 12/10/2008
Crikey! 21 O_O!

Me gods, if I were the 21st, I dun't know what I'd ask for!

I'm all giggly and giddly, lol. 21...I'll havta' remember that O_o.

GREAT chappie by the way :D. Yummily fantastico _!
enchantedlight chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
interesting, update soon please!
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