Reviews for What if
Binka chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Ahh! Don't frighten me like that! (Grabs Ipod and listens to very end of Breaking Dawn, three times. Sighs in relief.) But seriously, that would be awful. But hey, you know what would be worse? If Bella ran off with Jacob when he crashed the wedding. Or if Breaking Dawn never happened and she dumped Edward for Jacob at the end of Eclipse, you know, right after the kiss that shall never be mentioned or even thought of again. I suppose that would leave room for a fourth book in which the Volturi come to kill the Cullen's for not changing Bella then decide to kill the wolves instead because they stopped the Cullens changing Bella. Then Edward, love sick fool that he is, tries to protect Bella and gets killed in the crossfire. Then the rest of the Cullens are made to join the Volturi or die and they all live miserabley ever after. (Shudders. I'm kind of scaring myself now.)
At least with your ending, Bella has th chance to meet Edward all over again and because she knows what's likely to happen she can do everything better than in her dream and save all the potential misery of new moon. Hmm, I just got a new plot idea. Anyone reading this, feel free to write such a story as I only ever get as far as rough notes.
ohthisonechick chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
OMG!LIGHTBULB!DING! u should totally write a story about the first one where charlie wakes her up for school and tell about how or if she will tell them how she already knows and what will happen afterwords... i WOULD write it but it WAS your idea and im a bad author with a limmited imagination,but im sure u would do AMAZING!
dancefreak1005 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
id be super mega pissed if thats how BD ended. omg. but you know what would have pissed me off even more! if Bella would have woke up at the end of BD only to realize that she's in Jacob's garage & that Alice never came back in NM so she never reunited with Edward. ugh. now if that was how the books ended. grrr. iwould have thrown that book across the room! but thank goodness it didnt. ]] we would have done a strike. lmao
SisterOfAnElvenWannabe chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
yeah that would suck if it was just a dream the first one would be better though
Sofieaa chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
i would be so pissed i dont like open endings! or endings i just dont like.

Kobalt Kompanion chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
If it ended like that, then I would scream and throw a hissy fit.
peter2918 chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! that's a great way to end it! i've read a couple of novels where it ends as a dream or like a story they make up in their head, it's pretty funny. in my opinion it would be a better ending for breaking dawn. i really think the ending for breaking dawn was gay so i guess thats why i like this ending better.
xXMidnightEssenceXx chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
i seriously thought Stephenie was gonna do something like that!
WillyouDeleteThisaccount chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
your kidding that would be awful! i would hate it...i didnt even like breaking dawn for the pure fact of renesmee and i would be soo mad if it was a dream! total panic attack!
redheads-have-more-fun-HPLVR chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
i would scream! that would be awful!
lexarDuo chapter 1 . 12/7/2008

i knew people would react that way...
KoolBrunette06 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
OMG i read this and i'd to be really pissed off if it ended this way! id go insane and go on a killing rasmpage or something!1
cullenite21 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
OMG that got me pised!

hahaha aren't we all glad it doesn't end like that?

nice one-shot

XxShieldingMoonxX chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
omg tht would be horrible!
IloveLION chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I actually thought that was gonna hapen. Not een kidding. I kinda liked the idea of it ending there. But I like how it ended