Reviews for Not Only No, But |
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SomeLost chapter 1 . 9/26 Imma need to know what happened pretty please author TT |
hdres chapter 1 . 7/28 An interesting and well written story. Thank you |
Chalayne chapter 1 . 5/17 Kudos |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14 Your Evil!Dumbledore is magnificent! The whole scene was iconic, and I couldn't help but see McG as the evil scientist's assistant. You write with the energy of the silent era, and have a handle on the use of vernacular, if that's what I mean. So many tropes depend on no one, ever, even attempting to stop Dumbledore as he moves from hinky to bugnuts. The best ones have Bones constantly shooting down the chorus of crime researchers. "We have six dragon-size vaults of cold, hard evidence! Can we charge him?" "He's just too twinkly!" A-hem. My favorite visual was Snape sliding in late, adding everything up *fast* and picking a side. And it was all in the text, a neat and nuanced bit of stage direction for Rickman's ghost. Very cool. I got a little pissed about the leaving scene, the teens telling McG she'd been a great teacher and the school was otherwise fine-ish sbd bk what why why, why? would they even? I feel that you violated the law of probability in some evil way because they. Are. Leaving. Because she was a henchwoman! All the adults, the kids, the weather- although the goth scenes are appreciated. The bit where Moody is laughing? He was so perfectly Moody. Like Jayne on Firefly, he laughs at his friends' pain. And you write such 3d character moments, I guess without evenniticibg. |
Sargon Dorsai chapter 1 . 4/17 Rereading this, still fantastic! |
Beth1112 chapter 1 . 2/12 I like your story. |
ashenerden chapter 1 . 8/5/2023 Weasleys destroyed both Harry and Hermione. After accepting all those insults with aplomb no one would respect them in Britain. Kudos to Harry for cheerfully accepting any and all insults to his mother's memory. |
waya715 chapter 1 . 5/15/2023 A fantastic tale! |
erstwhile-S chapter 1 . 5/7/2023 Loved it! |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 1 . 4/27/2023 A nice start to a fic, or a ficlet as it stands. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2023 Liked it |
blcoachmac chapter 1 . 11/29/2022 Great Chapter, and yes that could make a multi chapter story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2022 Sorry to say but did Harry and Hermione only screamed at Ron and Ginny? Those dogs crossed the line and they didn't punish them? Harry did not even claimed life debt from that selfish brainless imbecile bitch of the worst order Ginny. What a disappointment. |
love4HP chapter 1 . 11/4/2022 Just some correction, counting curse on Harry's broom in first year, there were three attacks. Dementors almost sucked out Harry's soul in third year not once but twice. On train ride had it not for the patronus by Lupin it was a near thing. |
Jetstream chapter 1 . 7/25/2022 "... he was the one who carbonated her hormones..." What. Of all the similes... What. |