Reviews for Not Only No, But
Loatroll chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Thanks for the read.

Really something that _should_ have happened in GoF, I like the portrayal of the youngest Weaslys really canon in my opinion, they are indeed both twits as you say,

Looking forward to reading more from you.
Wolfric chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
I enjoyed this vignette. Thanks for writing. W.
SlickRCBD chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Nice concept and story overall, but you have several points where Harry has knowledge he doesn't learn until later in the books. In the beginning he mentions all three tasks. The tasks were kept secret and historically changed from tournament to tournament. Harry had no idea what the tasks would be until shortly before they happened, and wasn't supposed to have any clue about the dragons in the first task.

Another example is when Harry asks if Barty Crouch Jr was supposed to have died. Harry had no idea who that was in the book. Yes, Dobby had just IDed him, but Harry probably wouldn't have known he was supposed to be dead.
Fibinaci chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
very nice, I liked Harry's reasonably lowkey but firm response to his situation, if theyve been told anything I think her parents would be glad she left hogwarts.
GreyAB chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Thanks for this, it is a nice one shot and i found it quite entertaining to read.

if it ever did become a start to a longer story i would not be upset about it ;) but it works well just as it is.

good job.
kaylee-jane-potter chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
i can't believe you wrote this much of a chapter and have no definite plans to turn it into a regular story. it's really rather good. i love harry's rant about his name coming out of the goblet. i couldn't believe none of that was brought up in canon. seemed so stupid. good job though.
MeNoWantThisAccount chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
NO! Why did u end it? I wanted to read what would happen next!
Muirnin chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Hi honey!

Ok, since you said don't ask ... *grin* I will beg ... Please add this as part of a multi chaptered story! I love what you write and really wish there was more to read by you!

It's a great start to a fantastic idea ...

Anyway, hope you are doing well ... I just got home from working 8 1/2 hours of overtime on my day off ... its Sunday after all! I also worked 8 hours yesterday as well ... and I am going back in about 8 hours ... to start a really really long day ... I am still getting over my case of flu that I had last week.

Take care and write MORE!

*HUGS*

As Always,

Muirnin - who is reading rather than writing or even more extreme ... getting some much needed sleep!
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Loved it!

I won't ask for you to expand it since you said not to, but does begging count?
Dragon451 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Thank you very much. I enjoyed this story immensely. My only comment is what happened to Crookshanks. I assume Hedwig is doing what she did in book three and will meet Harry at the Grangers. Ah weel as this is beyond the scope of the piece I guess we shall never know. Thank You
NLaddict chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
that was amazing!
librarywitch chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
This was awesome! Totally fantastic. I would love to see this surrounded by other chapters, I guess we can only hope

:-). Well done as always.
Hlpur chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I laughed, I cried, all in all it was a good little story.
Gaara218 chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
The summary of the story intrigued me but as soon as you started bashing dumbeldore and ron I didn't want to read it any more. While I to think that dumbeldore was slightly manipulative and could have done more in the series and that ron could be a total jackass sometimes there is no reason to bash the shit out of them and make them act like malfoy. Bashing is so overdone it's ridicoulus the amount there is done. This is just my opinion and is not meant to be a flame. Some people like to read fic's like yours I'm sure, but I am not one of them. I wish you luck in your writings.
allen-f-ross chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I enjoyed that ficlet. I look forward to whatever story you work it into later.

Well done.
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