Reviews for Anything at All
Toshiko Sato chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This story is so incredibly sweet that I have decided to bake it into a cake and give it to L; it shall be a strawberry cake. This is a wonderful ficlet and I hope to see more stories like this from you in the future.
pdt chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
“Don’t touch me,” Mello says, and Matt holds him tighter, stroking his hair, refusing to shy away from the wreck of the burn. Mello’s fingers curl in Matt’s shirt, and he presses his face into Matt’s chest, both sides, indiscriminately. “I hate you,” he says. “I hate you; I hate you; I hate you more than anything.”

This is just... it's indescribably wonderful and perfect. Especially the last line in that paragraph. Matt knows what he really means, and Mello knows that Matt knows, and it's aljsdlasdkjflaksjd gorgeous.
Alizz chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
omgz

so short but so touching...i lovez itz
Miyamashi chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
That was really short and sweet. I liked how simple it was, and yet so sincere. A definite fave.
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
My first thought after reading was "AW THAT WAS ADORABLE..." and it's about the best description I could come up with. Wow, wow and wow.
SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
short story, but full of meaning...*cries* really good!
HereIGoAgain chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
AW! *melts into gooey puddle* That was the cutest. *sniff* Mello is such a cute sexy little thing
Phlogistics chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
This fic was so incredibly adorable. I was squeeing outloud as I finished it. Good job with the characterization and the writing itself.

This being the first new fic I've read in a few days- there was a power outage that lasted for two days in my area- it was a nice story to make me feel better. (God, I missed to internet...)

Very good fic!
TenshiXXX chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
:sniff: Poor Mello.
Ppandarr chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
OMG! do damn cute, i loved it!

Erm, sorry can't think of a better review other than

...AWESOME! x XD

CEB
neko11lover chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Lovely and cute. C2ed at Mello Loves (Hates?) Matt. :D
recipe for insanity chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Go Eltea! For liking this beautiful piece and making Tierfal post it.

It's adorably coherent and precious... Matt's voice tinged with respective awe over his individualistic "friend" but realistic in its sensitivity and nuanced loving tone. They truly care and know each other deeper than can be explained with all the poetic license we literary snobs like to use. Your simple reiterations and juvenilistic prose fit these two lost souls better than Mello's leather pants :)

This my dear, is knowing your characters!

Thanks for sharing.

~recipe
IceQueenRex chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Loved it; it was just the right amount of bittersweetness and as usual your writing was beautiful :) Good job with this and I thought the last line was simply "right" as an ending.
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Well if he said 'I love you' in this case wouldn't it mean 'I hate you'? ... that'd be confusing...
RichelleShalark chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
: ) I love hearing about Mello from Matt's perspecitve. It never gets old. You captured Mello completely in this. Great job! : )
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