Reviews for Missing
Bubli Sen chapter 16 . 8/1/2012
so sad story but so beautiful,just awesome
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
Amazing story! For the most part it was acurat.

I like how you didn't start off in BPOV. For some reason it made everything seem more mysterious.

Who wrote the letter that Edward thought was from Bella. Didn't Victoria dye already?

In chapter 13... I'm just confused. Who was it that was at the house? Why would the letter be there if people already thought that she died?

In general, I'd suggest you tell whose POV it is when the scene changes. Some are obvious but some aren't... like the part in chapter 13.

I liked both of the different endings. They were both happy... even in death.

Keep up the great work! :) (:

Tarah xXx
ClosedRevelry chapter 17 . 7/27/2011
I love the "not so happy" ending. But I understand why you did the traditional happy ending too. Amazing story!
Sumi-chan-desu chapter 16 . 3/9/2011
So sad. )':

I love this story. I really enjoyed reading this. :3
dis chapter 17 . 1/25/2010
I prefer the first ending but its all good
EverlastingPixie1997 chapter 17 . 8/24/2009
wow. now thats my happy ending. the real ending was really sad. i love how Bella stayed with Charlie til the end. loved reading this!
ChillStoryBro chapter 17 . 6/29/2009
Amazing, simply amazing. I am glad it didn't have an storybook ending. It made me realize how everything isn't perfect and it will never be. This is a true Romeo and Juliet story, it made me cry, laugh, and it was wonderful.
Barbara chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
I have goosebumps! I just finished reading your story and just wanted to let you know that I very much enjoyed it. I liked the first ending better than the alternate. Now I'll go see what else you have written.
HarrisM12345 chapter 17 . 5/31/2009
I love this story! I read the entire thing at once and it was awesome!

I cried after the first ending.
divine divinity chapter 17 . 5/11/2009
I think I prefer the other ending. Its fits better with the story and their relationship. But this was good also, a good alternate, not as dark so reaches more audiences.

Was well written, great flow and pace, the changes were subtle but really said a lot, Edwards actions to only pull her out instead of prove his love wasn't as strong as the other ending but still good.

I think just a note that Bella could make the burns go away with her ability... lol not that its important. I still stick with the other ending. :P
Black-Dying-Heart chapter 17 . 5/9/2009
Yay Yay Yay Happy Ending xD
waiting for mr.right chapter 6 . 5/9/2009
Great writing, good plot I have so far enjoyed this story I will probably read the rest very soon :)
Twilightaddict63 chapter 17 . 5/9/2009
i like this one alot better
divababe106 chapter 17 . 5/9/2009
This one was much better :D

well done

divababe106 chapter 16 . 5/9/2009

How could you,

I was welling up at that.

silent tears running don my cheeks!

Aww, that was so meaningful.

I'm still a little confused as to what the letter was Carlisle had and what it said.

and who wrote it?

oh well, now for a HAPPY ending :)
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