|Reviews for Does It Make A Sound?|
| TheKritty chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Reading this, I was captured in hell,together with Dean.I was down there,hearing all the noises and was next to Dean whispering 'yes' (yeah,right).Ok,I'm exaggerating,but not so ,lovelovelove your writing it.
| Mahtalie chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This was so good - really. Lots of emotion and imagery packed into so few words. Poor Dean. Amazing job.
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Hunny that is just very very good. One hundred words of gut wrenching quality. Fabulous. bev xx
| twinchaosblade chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
That was heart-breaking but very true. The poor guy suffered so much downstairs but I'm sure the greatest torment will always be thinking that he didn't live up to his own impossible standards.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Wickedly heart-breaking and probably true. It must have been hell (no pun intended) getting used to the screaming and pleading all around.
And I do imagine Dean considers the brokenly whispered "yes" worse than anything else he couldn't help but utter.
Very creative use of the prompt word, too.
| Mad Server chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
I like that Dean brings the idea of his dad to hell with him, that he still has that ideal to hold onto. If he made it through 30 years, he must have had something like that to keep him going.
| Merisha chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Aw, I love the fact that Dean thinks his Dad would be unbroken in hell. He worships the ground he walks on, and it's so heartbreaking that he doesn't think he'll ever be as good.
Hugs and luv
| TheDarklighter chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Awesome job! I loved the descriptives and the way you used 'keen'.
| CarlyJo chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
short, but powerful! great job!
| Dreadedfemale chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Wow. Just brilliant.
| Onyx Moonbeam chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
What a strong sound, nice descriptives there with "It makes his skin bleed." You definitely got the idea through strongly.
I feel so bad for Dean and John, luckily they are both out though!
| SciFiRN chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Wow, well done. Dean feeling weak compared to John and that last line is killer. Damn.
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
This is really good :) Best of the lot :)
| NC Girl chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Excellent job with this. It's very well written and packs quite a punch with the last line. Well done.
| PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Disturbing and heart-breaking.
A true jewel of pain.