Reviews for First Time
Allison Jenkins chapter 1 . 3/6
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Still waiting for the "VERY GRAPHIC" sex. Have sex and then write about it. Or watch a porn movie and then write about it.
Fifille chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Is this really your first lemon? It's pretty good ) Although I don't think that's how it would've happened...

Ehh, the ending wasn't that bad.

xJasperxAlicex chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
loved reading this! D
FlyFeather chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
loved the first time the two! Simple, pure and you said the pain she felt, i really appreciate it. I did not think the bad ending, however, the whole fic was great!
abcdefedcba chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Really enjoyed it :)

luena86 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
uh wow! I love Jasper, you're awesome! Write more ]
roxane beanre chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
it was good. i don't konw what you mean about the ending! it was great. keep writing!
HiHi-Ai chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
...god. That was amazingly cute and romantic! I screamed like every ten seconds while reading this! AHH! It's so adorable! I couldn't stop squeeling, fuck, I'm such a girl...well I AM a girl but I mean uh...ya know what mean heh heh... I just might read the book now that I've read this short little story...might.
TeamJakeBella chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
it was perfect, just like alice and jasper slow and sweet
Turquoise Girl chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
This was pretty good for your first try, but where was Jasper's dirty talk? Other than that, I liked the story. Nice job.

Vamp-by-Night chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
I liked it.

I only Jasper's southern tone was in it. Like maybe saying "darlin" or something like that.

But it was nice
The Very Last Valkyrie chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
You managed to turn a lemon into something sweet...I love it!
CeruleanKitten chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
I liked that, it was very cute : )
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/9/2008

Write more?
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