When r u gonna continue the story? Can’t wait to see what happen in the end

This story is amazing! It's really well written. It hasn't been updated in ten years so I don't have high hopes but I wish you could just finish the last chapters. I'd love to read the finale.

I year ago I read this fic... although I knew it was not completed I fell in love and couldn't stop reading. Your writing, the length, the situations, the relationships, the edwin. Everything is perfect in this fic. It brings me memories from when I read it and god, I can only hope you update one day because this... mmm! One of the best fma fics I've ever read.
I love how you portrait thw characters and their feelings along with what is happening. Damn I want to know what is next! Haha

After a year I leave this review. But I hope you are alrigjt, a lot of writers do not continue for personal problems. I hope this is not the case :)

If you decide to not keep going with this... even tho we want to know what will follow, you left it in a good moment of the fic, I'm satisfied

I hope you update and that you are fine! Thank you for this amazing fic!

I've only read up to the first 9 chapters. I don't know if I want to continue, because it hasn't been updated in over 7 years, and I feel like Ed and Winry's reunion here is a good place to leave it off for myself.

Just from the first 9 chapters alone, good worldbuilding, good character introspection, good character development from implicit and explicit struggles over the past few years. Terrifying struggles and very effective OC's. A marvelous and unique piece on its own merits.

This fic is just absoloutely amazing and it fits the show to a T!

Next Chapter plz?

Sigh. I knew I would regret reading this since it has been 4 years since this story has been updated and because of that I will probably never be satisfied, I will probably never know how it ends but at least it was so good while it lasted. Stayed up till 5 am at least four nights in a row because I couldn't stop reading. Love the EdxWin relationship and at least got some satisfaction from it out of this last chapter before the story stopped but I know that they are not safe. I knew Kimblee would be back. Also I so very much love Ed and Eddie, surprisingly more than I love EdxWin. I want more of that adorable loving relationship between father and son. And despite how intelligent, kind and compassionate Al can be, he can also be such a block head. I really want to see Al and Noa's relationship resolved. Needless to say I really want to know how this all ends, but I am sad because I will probably never get to know. I want to beg and plead for you to continue, you are so good at this. Please, please come back...

This fic is absoloutely amazing!

I don't know if anybody reviewed about this, but you have the dates wrong.
3 Oct. 1910
the day, the month, and the year.
You're pretty much saying that Ed and Al waited 7 years after burning their house to go out and search for the philosopher's stone?
I also know this because the the year Maes Hughes died was 1914, it's on his tombstone lol. I don't mean to flame or anything, but I highly recommend that you look up the timeline for Fullmetal and change your summary. lol

I love how it says "your kid's will have concussions" but why would she want to give her own children concussions? I find Winry's logic puzzling on that one little fact, I love it anyways!

oh poor poor me, I will not see a knew chapter for this story ...
well it COULD have ended here, if it wasn't for the evil Roy and the bomb ...

I'm really happy you're not evil and didn't do sometihng that would make Paz, Ruth and Yafit die !

it's 5 AM and I'm supposed to sleep
curse this story for taking away my sleep!
but I sitll love it :3

I have this weird feeling that Ed would somehow get in an tricky situation and his last hope would be using alchemy and he would bet everything on that alchemy try and when he succeeds Al would ask him how he knew alchemy would work and he would say I didn't

I don't want to trash Al
I mean what is better, sex and then dead Winry or no sex and alive Winry !