Reviews for Don't Forget
Torchbug chapter 18 . 5/19/2012
Roy is so mean here on Earth! And poor Al and Noa. Every time Al tries to confess, Ed or Winry walk in! And Izumi and Wendy are here too! And Riza! I am enjoying this story, and I can't wait to read the next chapters! Finally, a post-CoS story that actually appeals to me. The concept of Ed sleeping with another woman adds another layer to the tangle of emotions around the Elrics. Of course, they'd be causing trouble for Roy here too.
HyperCreampuff chapter 22 . 12/2/2011
I love this foc! It's so sad at times but overall just amazing and heartwarming!
HyperCreampuff chapter 23 . 12/2/2011
PLEAAAAASE tell me this hasn't been discontienued PLEASE! I'm begging you! OTL


Ctrl chapter 23 . 11/21/2011
First of all.. I noticed that you're last update was almost 2 years ago! Come back! Now this is what I really wanted to say, you are a truly inspiring writer. Reading this story has put me through so many emotions that you wouldn't believe. I have laughed out loud, teared up and cried, and had a tingly feeling at all the right moments. I don't know if you realize how amazing your writing skill is, but I am definitely in awe. It amazes me your knowledge on things.. for instance all of the European background on things, you make the story SO authentic its ridiculous. Even with small comments here and there on things like nuclear fission, and all sorts of other things. You make this story seem VERY real. I will tell you this now, I loved Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood.. excuse me LOVE, no past tense. It is my absolute favorite show and I could watch it for the rest of my life. On the other hand I didn't enjoy the first anime they created as much... but this story has made me appreciate the anime 100x more. You are amazing. Your ability to make a chapter so INCREDIBLY long, but feel like I've only spent two minutes reading it because it was so riveting. I don't usually enjoy action in fics, but you have done such a marvelous job, so creative and diverse than most. Your incorporation of the characters is astounding. Kluge's background as well as Eaglewing's is so complex.. I feel like I'm reading a published novel. You have the talent to make all of the components story intertwine into some complex plot. I mean even the small things like.. Winry spending that extra time looking at her watch in the mirror I think it was, making us feel that that will be significant later.. and of course it is! Even the sexual tension is so incredibly realistic. It isn't the slightest bit nasty and you make it so perfect. As for the beginning of the story when you said that characters might seem a little OOC, you handled it exceptionally. Yes sometimes we all like to alter the character's personality a bit to fit our stories. For the most part it always turns out to be so annoying to see someone change the characters. But not you, you gave so much support and background information to make us feel like we actually grew with both Winry and Ed. I coud go on for the rest of these 7704 characters I have left in this Review... but I don't want you to have to read forever about me drool over your writing abilities. Don't feel like you have to even reply! But I would appreciate it if you wouldn't mind telling me how you go about putting a story together? Like for instance, do you just start with an overall plot and then add smaller and smaller details until its practically written just needs the vocabulary and detail? Anyways, even if you don't finish this fic... (Although I think Winry might chuck a wrench if you don't let her get some more Ed action... :p) I am extremely blessed to have read it, and extremely happy to have experienced this as it has heightened my liking of the first anime series. I am also happy to have you as a rolemodel for any further fics I may write. Wonderful job, best wishes :3
Alice-Ann Wonderland chapter 23 . 10/30/2011
I really have enjoyed this story so far, it's well written, having the proper grammar makes a story much more of a grab, your writing style is unique, and I like that. And unlike others during sex senses, you don't use words that are a total turn off, some people write them so crudely that I don't want to read it. But your use of vocabulary is very well done, and all "trained eye" readers appreciate it.
Kai chapter 23 . 10/20/2011
Hullo, just wanna say that I think this fic is totally awesome man! I love your portrayla of everybody it's so friggin rad! I totally can't wait for the next chapter so please keep up the good work!

Dude thus is just friggin cool!
Guest chapter 19 . 10/15/2011
Loved the back story! But if Roy Kluge is so uncharismatic, then how did he manage to get Riza into the army, and on his team? meh, not important. The point is she's there, and she kicks ass. But again, why doesnt Roy just take Riza and run? The simplest sulolutions are usually the best I find. It's sad how Roy and Maes have grown to hate each other, I always thought of them like Ed & Al. Oh, and YOU SHOT WINRY! Quit messin with the EdWin fluff! I beg you! Although this outa bodyslam them together, finally. I mean they get close and Ed screws it up somehow. The. They get closer and oh look, Ed's messed up, again. But this outa light a fire under his arse. So thankyou :D
Guest chapter 18 . 10/15/2011
I'm still betting my pennies that Riza is Jewish. I mean that's pretty damn motivational stuff when your in germany in say the mid 1930's to 40's. But what I dont get is why Roy simply doesnt escape with Riza? Some moral delema? And selfless resolve to save not just the woman he loves but the Ok. I'm getting far too into this. Damn your fantastic writing ability. And yay, Winry has balls! Thank you :D
Guest chapter 17 . 10/15/2011
Yep. Could really have used that Ed plushie for the whole kimberlee incident. That was soo well written, it was fast paced, still believable and interesting, plus I got my fluff! ...And a little more! By the way & this will probably sound mega gross! But I find Winry mewing is MUCH more tastefull. Soo thankyou :D
Guest chapter 13 . 10/14/2011
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Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2011
Yep, Eddie is adorable. And you can just about see it in Ed's eyes when Eddie show him the automail book the gile that in one day Winry has managed to completely corrupted his son. Thought this chapter was nice to read and sweet. Thank you :D
Guest chapter 10 . 10/14/2011
Oh my god! I was suss at the start of the chapter when Ed held that blonde boy protectively, and then bam! Just, wow. Stop messing with the EdWin! First rose, now an actual threat? Now I say all this with love, as I love your work and think it's amazing, I'm just having a strong reation. I guess it is perfectly reasonable, I mean over five years? The boy must have, at some stage, at least tried to move on. And don't get me wrong I bet Eddie is absolutely adorable and perfect, but I worry for my EdWin :( still this story is amazing and yes this chapter was like a hit, coz I'm hooked on this stuff... Gonna have. Problems when I get up to date... Thankyou :D
Guest chapter 9 . 10/14/2011
Naw, Ed's learnt the ways of the woman, kinda... He cuddles now! Score! I feel like I need an Ed plush toy to hold (squeeze) whilst I read, 'coz this story is really good, and I'm an absolute sucker for fluff. I love the whispy snippets of times long passed, it adds a melancholy depth which I love. As always thankyou :D
Guest chapter 7 . 10/13/2011
Riza's Jewish, isn't she. That's why Roy is so desperate for power, to save her. Was Sigfried Gracias brother and gay perhaps? Why did Roy kill him? Or what happened? I'm soo engrossed in this fic. Its really good, I love all the cameos and subplots, god bless Armstrong he's fabulous :D thank you
Guest chapter 6 . 10/13/2011
I don't know why but I've always disliked Rosa... Probably to do with my EdWin fixation, and she's messing with it, grr. As if years of mental and physical separation weren't enough! Also, Ed usually doesn't sleep alone ay? I really hope he plays foster dad to those kids I think they adopted, and helps keep their nightmares away... Not another (or several) woman. Congratulations, you've got me hooked. But now I'm really worried, what if Ed does have a biological son? Oh dear. Thank you
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