|Reviews for Don't Forget|
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/13/2011
Ok. Soo didn't see that coming! Hughes is alive? I love you! Thank you thank you thank you! It's true, this story is really interesting, I can't believe it took me this long to stumble across it. Oh the shame. You write the characters really well, you don't exaggerate their characteristics, like many others do, and for that I thank you :D hehe Ed's going to flip! I can't wait for the reunion! It's probably going to be anti-climactic, but oh well! Thank you! :D
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
I was kinda right, eh? I can't believe kluge is mustang in Germany! Ed's gonna be pissed! But then, where's Riza? Oh, and the whole ulrich thing was interesting, real interesting. Thankyou :D
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/13/2011
You killed Den! How could you! Yes I know it is inevitable, but still! I loved that doggy sho much... Poor Winry, stay strong woman! Coz soon you'll be in Ed's strong arms... Heh. And no, I'm not a pervert, I'm a hopeless romantic, there's a difference. :D thank you
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
Ok here's what I'm getting from the story so far, ahem: the ss want Ed coz he's a rebel leader & has automail- something completely mystical to these people- he was captured, luther was in charge of him, and since he's a closet gay (or something) he helped Ed. Ed escaped, Luther was 'disciplined' and went to armestris to bring Winry to Ed (I really really hope!) because the ss are after her to get Ed, and she'll be safest (& happiest) with Ed, who really wants to protect her & thats why he sent Luther. Sadly I'm also guessing that luther is going to be the toll to bring her Germany. Too bad I like Luther :( anyway it's really interesting so far :D and I'm a big fan of your work, particulary the one shot with the lovers bridge, it was great! Thankyou :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Well written and I'm intrigued. Confused but intrigued :D thankyou
| The FMA Ultimatum chapter 23 . 9/29/2011
please update faster i cant wait for the next chapter. u should make this story as long as possible
| GalanthaDreams chapter 15 . 9/13/2011
Your story is gorgeous-peerless in this fandom. Few could match the joy you bring with your words.
| TheTimeTraveler chapter 23 . 9/8/2011
Gee, gosh this is just so darn amazing. I've been readin' non stop til' I got to this chapter, and I was so dissappointed to find that it's been over a year since the last I update. I do hope ya didn' discontinue it. Lord knows I'd be mighty sad you did. Not too rish you or nothing, I just wanna know that there's hope of a continuation.
Anyway regarless, I just wanna thank you for posting such a wonderful story, even if it never gets finished I still enjoyed it.
You have a great day now, and take care. Maybe I'll see in the next chapter, maybe not, but I sure did enjoy the ride.
| TheTimeTraveler chapter 23 . 8/16/2011
| XDreamzX chapter 23 . 8/1/2011
I'll admit, I, like a lot of people on this website, rarely bother to review. I don't know why I don't...but I feel incredibly guilty about it. I have, however, reviewed this one under an anonymous name, and I'm going to review it again right now.
I'm about to reread this story for the third time (I think) and it would probably be better for me to read it again before reviewing, but I have to get this out :D
I started reading this story years ago now, and sadly it hasn't been updated since March 2010 :( I assume real life got in the way...or maybe you just lost inspiration in fanfiction altogether and never felt like finishing it. Whatever you choose to do, I will undoubtedly support you :D Because really, this story touched me. I'm a critical person by nature, so when I say that this story is amazing...it was amazing. The characters were in-character, developed nicely, and well-rounded...the plot was also well-rounded and magnificently weaved...I can honestly say that this story would be brilliant as a stand alone and if it were a novel, I would buy it :D I have yet to read another fanfiction that is THIS good. I've read good fics, even ones that have made me feel like shedding a tear or two, but I think this one really takes the cake...just based on quality alone. You are a truly skilled writer. I definitely admire you as, well, something of a writer myself *blushes*.
As far as critiquing it goes (because what is a review without constructive criticism?), my only issue was that sometimes I felt you over-described some things; although that could be argued as just your writing style, which I love regardless, by the way. That and the sex scenes xD Call me a kid, I've never been much for lemony stuff (as I feel it unnecessary sometimes)...but I'm sure pretty much every other fan of this story loves it :P
Back in the days when EdxWinry was still unrequited in the manga and the anime's ending was absolutely BUTCHERING to fans like me, this story really made a difference :P It managed to fulfill what I felt had been missing from the anime, and, more importantly, the movie's tragic Edwin ending TT A lot of other post-Shamballa fics have been written, but believe me...this is the only one I've read that could even begin to live up to the first anime and its depiction of Edwin (contrary to popular belief, I found the first anime to be wonderful in spite of its ending and the pain it caused me ;( ) So thank you for this.
And thank you for writing a fanfiction that was more than just fluff and angst. I read so much of that stuff that it becomes all-consuming, and a fanfic with a decent (who am I kidding, it was awesome) plot is quite refreshing. I could see this as a book. Or a movie. Or an anime. No lie :D
I feel as though I'm rambling now, but the whole point I'm trying to make in this review is that...well, thanks, I guess :P I believe you have done the Edwin (and the FMA) fandom justice here. Not just this story, but your others as well I found great. So even if you never finish it...I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it. A lot.
Peace out, hope to see you return :)
| TheTimeTraveler chapter 23 . 7/31/2011
| Soprana chapter 23 . 6/30/2011
I just found this story a few days ago and I usually don't write reviews, so please forgive me. But, this story caught my complete attention and held it the whole time. Every chance I got, I dashed back to the computer to continue reading this story. You have an amazing voice in your work with a detailed dialogue and a spectacular plot. I'm on the edge of my seat the whole time, feeling as if I am with the characters themselves. I honestly can't describe how fantastically awesome you made this story! I can sense that your enjoying writing this story to its full potential, and that enjoyment is contagious. I look forward to the chapters in the future!
| Creampuff chapter 23 . 6/30/2011
Oh wow this story is awesome! but it's been a year is it still open?
OMG! OMG! OMG! THIS FIC ROCKS! Please update ASAP!
| The Real Lightning Alchemist chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Omg...Even in the time that you haven't updated this story, since last year, reading it over and over again - especially the Al x Noa parts - makes me exceedingly anxious that you would finish this story so I and everyone else finally gets to know how Al and Noa sort things out. I've been trying to picture what would happen, but nothing can meet up to what you have done with them so far. I can't explain how much I love this pairing - perhaps to the same level as Ed and Winry! (I'm practically anticipating the moment they finally consummate. FSJAL)
w So...PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! PLEEEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE! T_T *sniff* You've been away forever!
| ice-liger chapter 23 . 5/13/2011
i love ur story i just dont know how to put my exact feelings into words ur story is just... im speachless i read all 23 chapters in one day i just could not stop! this is one of the best ive read all year!