|Reviews for If I should die|
| JenLouise0201 chapter 12 . 6/26/2009
Girl, I had to try to find your story, and found myself another chapter to enjoy. But now, I'm stuck. Please update. This story is amazing!
| pour etre je chapter 12 . 4/21/2009
this is so good! but upsetting... but totally worth it!
keep going! cant wait until you have another chapter up here!
i'll be waiting! lol
abbie - england - x
| GothicaMay chapter 12 . 2/27/2009
AW! How sweet!
Just a suggestion I don't think Bella should be changed until she's like on her death bed!
| kwfreeman chapter 12 . 1/19/2009
love this chapter!
| bluehazegrl chapter 12 . 1/17/2009
Great update! I can't wait for the next!
| DesiDude chapter 12 . 1/16/2009
Yay! They finally get together... as always, waiting eagerly for your next update!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 12 . 1/15/2009
B! That was pretty damn good so far! Now for the love of God hurry up and finish it!
| FRK921 chapter 12 . 1/15/2009
| dark but so Lovely chapter 12 . 1/15/2009
love the chapter post more soon
| 00MaryAliceBrandon00 chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
This was the sweetest chapter! I hope everything works out! keep up the great work!
| Handerra chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
| yazcullen chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
This was a beautiful chapter thank you so much i really want to know how youre gonna end it. Please update soon!
| hellena8989 chapter 12 . 1/14/2009
i really like your story, its so well written! lolz i cried a few times, yea oppz...
anyways update soon!
| turtlestar chapter 11 . 1/12/2009
I really, REALLY enjoy your take on the "Bella with a terminal illness" plot. It's such a beautiful, bittersweet story. You have the interaction between Bella and Edward down perfectly - it's achingly sweet.
In the previous chapter you asked opinions on what should happen next. I'm overjoyed that you're leaning toward a happy ending! It would be tragically unfair for everyone (particularly Bella, Edward, and Alice) to suffer so much and THEN have her die on top of it. I think adding some James action would be AWESOME; he's just a really good bad guy, and perfect for bringing out all of Edward's protective instincts. Maybe I'm weird, but whenever there's a good romantic storyline and Jacob suddenly appears, it annoys me. He always seems to add an unnecessary level of complication to everything. Unless he's playing the part of the overly-pushy/slightly delusional/nearly abusive bad-guy suitor that Bella has no interest in whatsoever. (Can you tell that I was raised on Disney? All I want in a story is romance, generic angst, a gorgeous prince to rescue the damsel in distress, a clear-cut villain, and a happy ending.) But I digress. You have an excellent story already. All I can hope for is a good climactic fight scene, Bella getting changed, and them living happily ever after.
Thank you for your wonderful fic, and I hope to see an update soon!
| Shadohart chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
OH Goodie! If I do this fast enough then I get to be the 100th review.
I read the whole thing before reviewing. It's sort of what I do. It helps me to get a feel for your voice and to understand your perspective.
It's all been done before in some way or another. I did read one other FF about Bella having an illness. I have not found the words yet to review it. Yours however.. this story. It is sweet, bittersweet even. I like your take on this concept very much.
Thank you for sharing it with us!