Reviews for Different Eclipse Moment
mrs.bookreader cullen chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
hey just make bella cry her eyes out and then edward will be really nice and calm her down and ya and then he will let her go to jake's as he "hunts"again but really he is tracking that dude who hurt bella and he finds him and it turns out to be (some one they know make it cool)and then he goes home and tells the rest of the cullens and ya
Dazzled For Eternity chapter 4 . 1/12/2009
idea: they go home and edward is like OMG! WTF? then he goes to find the guy and he rips the guys throat out after making him say that he's sorry. then edward goes back home and bella is so traumatized that she tries to kill herself. everybody goes hunting, and bella is alone at the cullen house. she gets a knife and cuts herself, and then alice sees and edward comes home just in time to bite her and save her life, and she turns into a vampire. happily ever after. unless u wanted her to die, then edward could be just too late, and he licks up all of her blood from the floor around her where her corpse lies. then he goes to the volturi. bella goes to hell for killing herself, and edward goes to hell for being a vampire (no soul), so they meet each other in hell and fall in love, and then go to heaven, because love makes them go to heaven. u can use my words and ideas from this review, and i will b glad if u do, but i really dont care. or they could just go to hell and not remember each other.
Holly360 chapter 3 . 1/12/2009
good chapter

please update soon
A is for Angel chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
Romance4ever chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Great chapter.I love it links for all the dresses is all are so beautiful for their night on the town.
lover of all book chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
OMG! that was pretty good, i can't wait to see what happens at the club! Is a guy going to hit on Bella or the other girls? What if it was jacob!that would be weird.