Wtf?!

I'm not following along too well. Why can't they use lighting spells, or oil lamps, or something? What about checking the kid's pulse? Diagnostic spells? She already healed Harry, so use some magic.

What a beautiful chapter! I like Ben (and his new name) so much!

Crookshanks! (Sobs uncontrollably) this was a good chapter.

Alright, so I started to read this about midnight, and it's now 04:20 am. I just couldn't put it down as it was just the read I needed.
Thank you for making this.

What an amazing story! Why this doesn't have more favorites I don't know. Thank you for sharing this with us.

When Harry was talking about knowing what it was like not to have a family and that he wasn't going to let it happen to others, I'll admit my eyes got a bit watery. Not the best when you're waiting in a line with other people lol. Well done capturing something so emotional. I feel it is something that Harry would say too, not wanting others to go through their childhood like he did - without being loved. Unlike how he was portrayed in the "canon" Cursed Child.

I honestly really loved reading this. What a great story!

De Verdad Perfecto

Perfecto!

Maravilloso!
Perfecto

The lack of scene breaks can sometimes be jarring, and there are little errors here and there. But in a way, that seems rather fitting for a story like this, written in more youthful years. Families and unions like this aren't without their flaws, but this gem finds its own radiance with all attendant warmth, love, and brilliance. Thanks for the read, cheers.

I can already tell this is going to be an amazing read :D

whoa! Ginny is awesome

this is really good