There is no such thing as too sentimental in stories like these.

I almost cried a lot during the chapter. I have great tear control sometimes.

everything was so beautiful and sweet and full of love. I love this story with all my strength.
it is an example of love, tenderness and family. fabulous writing and incredible history.
thanks for sharing, i love it

jack suggesting a baby name makes me smile

and I can say that this must be the best description about a wedding. it is so beautiful, poetic and adorable. full of love to the point of hurting my heart. it was amazing

and this ending, oh god. it's a beautiful story

Lovely

I love it so much

oh, i was so sad about jack's past. but I'm glad he got over it
and harry and hermione's concern was very well written

I love this story

"I know what it's like to lose everyone"
it broke me

harry has so much in common with these kids. and they are all discovering how to be a family
and this is one of the best stories about love and family that I've read

I love it so much it could hurt

Hey, it's so beautiful about how anxious they are to get married, how they can't wait to live together

and i love little jackie, she is adorable.

and harry's attitude of looking for voldemort's followers seems like something he would do

the best christmas

and I think Ben is very credible here.
feeling jealous of his brother or hearing his story breaks my heart.
so hermione saying that she loves him unconditionally makes me want to cry.
and then he is the first to call her mama and now i am a melted mass of love

that was very beautiful

the sleigh ride was so adorable, I love the tree

I love it

yaz made me smile sweetly even though i wanted to cry
Harry and Hermione get along so well with the kids and they try their best.

it is so beautiful, I love this story and I love how you write children

it was good to read a mild disagreement, it makes both more humane and realistic

and ben with the map made me smile and harry is sweet so calling him son

crookshanks almost made me cry, it was so sad

I had a lot of fun with the meeting with Mr. and Mrs. Granger

ronald was sweet

"Ron said angrily, obviously forgetting to preserve his life"

lmao, i love how you write. it's very good
Sergeant Gina is so hilarious, I love his orders, and they rushing to comply is even more hilarious

Harry was all confused by the proposal, but it was so sincere that I found it so beautiful and perfect for this story. i loved it