Reviews for Forever
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
A great story. Very well written.
twiffreading chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I realize that this review might be a bit late. But better late then never. I have read many stories and wrote a few as well. But this one, this is one of the few that made my heart break. I love this story. I'm so glad I found it.
Sakiru Yume chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
That was angsty, but I liked it. I have one correction, though. I think that it should be "And me?" instead of "And I?" I may be wrong, though.
meimei42 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I'm a sucker for the dark stories. Really beautifully written though. I think you managed to capture the emotion you needed to in order to make the story work. Great job.
luv2watchtv chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Wow! This is good - I like it. Even though it's sad and tragic and not a happy ending I like it. And I loved the italics at the end.

I also loved you last line

I didn’t hear Edward’s sweet voice. He had stopped caring. And I? I had stopped breathing.

That was beautiful - that ending line really finished the story off perfectly.

Great one shot!

XNicolex
Socialxxhazard chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Wow that was so good...in a very tragic sort of way.