Reviews for Misunderstood
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Very nice.
Jinlongbao chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
Very detailed and touching :) I'm glad Toph's parents finally accepted her as herself
To CyclonePsycho chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I love it! Tokka's RULE I LOVE THE TOKKA SHIP! WRITE MORE MORE.
Ayriannah chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
It was wonderful and amazing and perfect...but.

In the penultimate paragraph, you switched to present tense, which is fine-but then you switched back to past tense in the final one, which is odd, and it seems like a few words in the last sentence, while not technically in the wrong order, sound strange.

("Now, they were able to really give their daughter the love type she deserved." sounds odd. It seems like it should be

"Now, they were really able to give their daughter the type of love she deserved.").

The last little bit left me wanting to write a criticism underneath my review...so I did...(meant constructively, not as a flamey-fireball of firebending!)
Rasberry Parfait chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Aw! This is awesome. Really.
MysteryTrek chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Wonderful story, I can't believe this only got two reviews.
papapapuffy chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Only one review? How wrong. It's a great story! I love the detail. I hope you write more!
Rand0mV1rus chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Wow, you wrote that exactly how a parent would feel about there child. Great job! :)

-Rand0mV1rus