Reviews for Put Out the Light
Raised with Fangs chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
hm very interesting. interesting hm. okay. ah, i dont know what to say. ah, um, hm. its good, very very good, im speechless, ahh, i really dont know what to say.
Anne Lessing chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Oh my god, this is such a good story! I loved it, I really did! I did notice more than a few grammar mistakes...just problems with commas. Otherwise, though, great work.
frodoschick chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Oh...my...God. This was incredible. I have no words to describe, only praise. You made me catch my breath and hold it in, wanting to read more. Your stylization was perfect, the descriptions pull you in and hold you there in the grip of the tale. Oh...wow...*claps* Absolutely perfect. I adore. I adore. Nothing more to say. I adore.