Reviews for Subconscious Slip Up
MariShal chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Cute! I love when Harm calls her Sarah :)
laura carr chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
great story.
starryeyes10 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
great story.
DragonMouse chapter 1 . 2/1/2002
hehehe. "Down on one knee, too." hehehe. That waz great. very cute. ( 8
Valleri chapter 1 . 12/13/2001
That's really cute. :)
gabriela chapter 1 . 12/4/2001
:):):) Very nice thought.
silversprite chapter 1 . 11/30/2001
lol! short and sweet, wonderful!
Mara Jade chapter 1 . 11/29/2001
That was very cute...and i see you have one for Mac, as well. I'll go check it out. Anyhow, very cute, and i hope you write more!
pol chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
tee hee. that was even better than the ;harmburger; one. oh, that was soooo good. i just wish they lasted a little longer. love ya.
Karen ILUVEYESONLY Murray chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
Tee hee hee. Heheehehe.
amber chapter 1 . 11/27/2001
hey that was really cute, write more its really good so far :)
Nic chapter 1 . 11/26/2001
Very sweet! I'd love to read more like this.
karen chapter 1 . 11/26/2001
Hey

Just read your story. It is really good. You are right sweet and simple :)

Karen
Ximatrii chapter 1 . 11/25/2001
Cute, very cute. I hope you plan to post more of these short stories, they're easy to read between classes. Good job, and good start!