|Reviews for For the Cause|
| readeradv chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Keep up the excellent work!
| Farla chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I found your writing style for this insanely annoying. A lot of your sentences just don't quite work. I'd go into greater detail, but it really is annoying to try to read. I think a lack of commas may have something to do with it, or a lack of contractions.
| Avegaille chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
8D So that's what the bet was for... lawl, but I actually find the first person point of view of Holly's very interesting... I see she's a bisexual... *bricked*
Either way, it's short but had so much emotion hidden inside~