|Reviews for Creature of Darkness|
| Wraith Fan chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
OMG!THIS WAS SO CREEPY AND SUSPENSEFUL!:-D loved it :-) I WANT SEQUEL!:-D oh oh, what is the Count going to do to poor Risella?...
Greetz: Wraith Fan -xXx-
| xxxXLadyPhantomXxxx chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I thought it was very well written. I like your style of writing. Thank you by the way for your stories. I know I'm enjoying them. :)
| jill1235 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Ooh.. I like, i like! Pleas do continue!
| MastersofNight chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
You really built up the suspense at the beginning, and then the confrontation. The last at the end sort of left us all hanging-but that is the purpose of the one-shot, correct? To make the reader squirm and wish there was more...
| HDKingsbury chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Decidedly spooky and a lot of fun! You did a nice job in creating an atmosphere of fear and terror. And of course, you can't keep a good vampire down with only a rusty knife!
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
Very ingenius! (You know, the character Michael reminds me of pop superstar Michael Jackson.) Keep up your awesome writing!
| darkvampyressx chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
| bloodXblade chapter 1 . 12/15/2008
Eh... never read the book so I don't know how it's meant to be... but it's very interesting. Purple blood eh...
| Lia Felix chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
One thing: Vampires don't reflect. That's one of their traits.
| Vesperae chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
One. Singular sensation. Every little step she takes.
It's quite good.
More interesting to read than PotO actually...
The phrasing could be improved...
Some of it sounds slightly...odd.
E.g. Emily sighed, crouched and picked up the half peeled apple from the ground with one hand, and the knife in the other.
What, the knife was on the ground as well? Or it was already there?
She's an interesting character. Whispering, just after she stabbed some bloodsucker in the back. Literally.
A fate worse than death...
All those possibilities...
Next chapter happening anytime soon?
| yukisana chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I can't describe how much I liked it...
I haven't read Dracula (planning to though), but it's so good!
I love how he suddenly appeared (although, you could have made it freakier... like BANG! freaky) then killed him.
And of course, has to be a stab in the heart with a cross or something?
My favorite element of this story is... the surprise and suddenness of when he appeared... Also, how he killed the person after he said "...more than a rusty dagger in the back?"
OH, and also "the girl who dared harm me, however..." THAT'S FREAKY! CREEPY! Is he gonna rape her? Lol... probably suck her blood~
Anyway, great story!