|Reviews for Drowning|
| cindythechef chapter 33 . 9/30/2014
This was so good. I love love loved it ;)
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/13/2014
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| Cha'90 chapter 33 . 6/9/2013
Awesome story. I love the Gibbs-Tony interaction and I'm really glad that Miranda doesn't turn out to be the bad guy...girl.
| Athena13 chapter 33 . 6/2/2013
Great casefic and great Tony/Gibbs son/father story. Loved Tabby in this. Great story.
| TriggerHappyJax chapter 33 . 4/6/2013
I loved this story! This is the second story of yours I have read...looking forward to reading the rest!
| TracyTravis chapter 33 . 3/29/2013
Just read your story again...loved it! Thanks!
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 33 . 2/1/2012
He was in no mood for gobbledygook Haa Love that line
again ha ha! 'Whoever finds me something that solves this case before I have to see this weirdo tomorrow will get the right to drive the truck for a month.' 'My health's fine!' exclaimed Tony. 'Honestly Boss, do I look sick? I'll tell you what makes a person sick: hanging around in hospitals picking up germs from sick people.'
'One more thing, Dinozzo,' he said, his voice low and serious. 'I don't know where that crap about you not being worth my protection comes from, but you are no less valuable than anyone on the team – including me. If I even suspect that you're thinking otherwise again, I'll head slap you into next week. Got that?' He was showing his parental/caring side for Tony.
Use your geek crap and track my cell!' Only Tony can get away with that towards Tim.
Love when Gibbs went all boss like to concerned father towards Tony worried that he didn't take anyone with him to check out VAy then asking if hes taking his medicine.
So glad Tony is Ok. And he is finally realizing HE HAS/HAD PEOPLE THAT CARE IF HE LIVES OR DIES. AND HE HAS WHAT HE ALWAYS WANTED IN A :DAD IN GIBBS.
| nitetales chapter 33 . 8/27/2011
Hi I know that my review of this story might be a little too late, seeing at I just read the story beautifuly written too, but I was wondering if you had gotten around to written the sequel to it. I like the way you turned direction and made it partly TonyandAbby. If you haven't and I hope that this review encourage you to write the sequel, I want more Tabby along with papa bear Gibbs.
| Madances chapter 33 . 4/16/2011
Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it very much. Good job. Tracy
| sterno chapter 33 . 11/6/2010
LOVE THE THOUGHT OF TONY LIKING ABBY OVER ZIVA.. WHAT A PAIR THOSE TWO WOULD MAKE.. THANKS FOR WRITING AND POSTING A REALLY GOOD INTERESTING STORY ESPECIALLY BEING A BUSY MOM! TAKE CARE AND KEEP WRITING!
| jo993551 chapter 8 . 5/15/2010
I'm usually all for the supernatural but somehow I raely don't like madame Vay.
| Samantha Black chapter 23 . 1/23/2010
That's are two really confusing sentences...
"Mr. Partington sat unharmed but tied to one of the velvet covered chairs. Standing beside him, the gun trained directly at her, was Dianne Partington."
Who has the gun trained at Dianna Partington? "her" who is that? (as Mr.! Partington sits in the chair?)
Might want to change that bit :)
| Samantha Black chapter 18 . 1/23/2010
I really, really love this story and I'm so glad that I still have many more chapter to read
Just a short question...
In chapter 12, Vay said that the reading cloth was from her late husband but in this chapter Ziva said that she was never married?
Did she lie or is it a little oversight?
Love your story anyway!
See you later,
| katesari chapter 33 . 1/19/2010
i skipped this story so many times in my wanderings through all the NCIS stories, that i now of all times wanted to read it. it was a very good read! good and solid story. read it within a few hours. hope to find more stories in your profile because i'd definitely read them.
| Livia2001 chapter 33 . 1/17/2010
Fantastic story! Thank you so much for sharing.