It's a door JAMB, not a JAM.

It's "She deserved a better life THAN that," not THEN. "Then" tells when. (We'll eat and then we'll go.) "Than" shows a comparison. (She is nicer than her sister.)

The plural of "hero" is "heroes," as in "The heroes are admired by all." "Hero's" is possessive, as in "The hero's cape was wrinkled."

It's "whoa," not "woah." Look it up if you don't believe me.

I loved reading this story, even though it’s unfinished. At least we got to see them happy together for a bit.

Just found this story and begging to know how it ends between these 2. Please update!

Great story, wish there was more!

Ahhh okay good…

Ahhhhhhhh

Haha - Heavens to Murgatroyd is the expression! Snagglepuss used to say it all the time in the Yogi Bear cartoons. We used it a lot back in the 60s. Really liking this story. Someone recommended it in another story written many years ago. I've been trying to read all her recs over the days I've been reading her story. It's actually putting me behind in my housework - lol! If you ever go back and edit, search the word "minuets" and change it to minutes. Spell check won't catch that one because it's an actual word, just not the one you meant. Thanks for the pleasant afternoon of reading :)

Continue por favor

I've been following this story for over a DECADE and somehow forgot its unfinished?! Please tell me you'll come back to it! and ASAP

Is this story finished? I would really love to read more.

I REALLY hope you come back and finish this story! I know it’s been a long time but a girl can dream.

Yesss! I can’t wait for “tomorrow”