Reviews for Out Of Choices
amsrule chapter 47 . 11/27
really enjoyed the steady relationship development and the back and forth POVs!
Kelly457 chapter 3 . 4/12
Really like your Bella...actual personality here.
Kelly457 chapter 22 . 1/8
You have redeemed yourself...last chapter all I wanted to do was smack Bella stupid for being a complete asswipe(ess?) to Edward...glad you have let her grow a little less egocentric. Finally.
Kelly457 chapter 4 . 1/7
I'm really enjoying your take on Midnight Sun/Twilight...it's nice to see some guts and personality in the characters!
HisLove chapter 12 . 6/1/2016
This chapter… Yes (head nodding)
So perfect
HisLove chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
Reading your reviews. I cuss (not curse) like a sailor (and my mom and my granny). So keep up the FUCK'N good work and don't let anyone dictate to you how to write. Fuck them all. I've got a list 30 deep (with at least 100 read) of twilight FF to get through (and that list grows every week). I picked this story needing a break from the other two I'm reading and I was hooked from chapter 1. I rarely give reviews but am trying to make an effort because stories like yours deserve acknowledgment and encouragement. Kudos.
EVK70 chapter 47 . 5/5/2016
:)
TwilightFactss chapter 6 . 9/12/2015
Why isn't Charlie her father?
Michmaci chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Don't know why the review I posted today was submitted as guest...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
I've just finished this wonderful story, having absolutely raced through it to find out what happens... Now about to reread it "properly "
I loved the interaction between the main characters and the development of the relationship, Bella is courageous but infuriating, love her attitude!
I found the whole jasper/Seattle event somewhat tedious but understand the need to move the story along...
Looking forward to having time to do the story justice, thanks for sharing it!
jk chapter 6 . 10/28/2014
. .hoo... .give. . . .anyone
... .being. . .bitch... . .bella
jk chapter 3 . 10/28/2014
. . . ... .shes. . .
... . ...whore... .like. .child.
. . . . ... . ..but. .act.
. . .. . . . ...
mygooddog chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
I am enjoying your story, the cursing is only getting worse. Your Bella is a smart, well read , intelligent well versed girl. The constant F-bombs and other cursing only shows a low class person who has no regard for herself. I don't read your Bella that way. I am giving your story 3 more chapters. If something dose not change, or you give me a good reason for her fowl mouth. I am gone. Its a real shame a good story is spoiled by cursing that is not needed. (counted 14 f-bombs on this page NOT NEEDED)
mygooddog chapter 3 . 8/27/2014
I am enjoying the story line BUT all the cursing is not needed! No one who talks like that . I am going to read a little more to see where this is going, if it is not needed - Cyea
Guest chapter 14 . 9/13/2013
it is a good change bella running away from Edward, love to see Edward Sweating for her
thank you
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