Reviews for Locker Room Therapy
Kiki1o1 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
great chappie!
Denial's child chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I've already read this story a few months ago, and I had loved it. Still love it now. I think it's mainly because it's -

(Sorry, I'm suddenly feeling lazy, and I've read you were french in your profile, so...")

C'est l'une des meilleures caractérisation que j'ai jamais vues.

"... Heh."

Sasuke sounds smug. Naruto catches himself pouting. "I didn't mean it like that."

"Sure you didn't." Sasuke nibbles on his jaw, almost playful. If Naruto were in his place, he'd say 'Aha! You want me' and do a little pelvis-shaking dance, but of course Sasuke is cooler than that, so he only thinks it hard enough for Naruto to know.

Dans ce passage en particuluier, je pouvais vraiment imaginer la scène, et c'est vraiment typiquement Naruto et Sasuke. Dans tous les AU que j'ai lu, leur personnalités étaient toujours changées, ne serait-ce qu'un minimum, mais je sais pas, je trouve que ce passage montrait vraiment l'essence des personnages. Dans la plupart des fics,( sauf quand il est totalement OOC, genre carrément gay -") Sasuke a juste l'air cool, distant et sans émotions- ooh ça me rappelle un autre passage tiens.

"It's strange to remember all those times he and Kiba and Shika joked that Sasuke must be some kind of reptile, that he probably bleeds ice. Nothing could be further from the truth. Sasuke is a volcano."

C'est exactement ça. Dans la plupart des fics, Sasuke c'est un reptille; mais là c'est un volcan. Je pense que c'est en grande partie pour ça que j'aime autant cette histoire- les sentiments des personnages, leur façon de les exprimer, de se comporter l'un vis-à-vis de l'autre, tout m'a paru parfaitement IC. Trrrrrrrès agréable changement par rapport aux fics que je vois la plupart du temps.

Idem pour le persaonnage de Naruto, impeccablement réalisé, surtout sa psycologie/façon de penser après ce qui lui est arrivé

J'ai aussi beaucoup aimé l'intrigue, très origianale. Sans compter que l'histoire est magnifiquement bien écrite.

En lisant, j'avais l'impression de lire une autre version de Naruto , avec un contexte parfaitement différent, et pourtant les interractions entre les personnages, et les personnages eux-mêmes restent identiques à ceux de l'oeuvre originale.

Et c'est exactemtent ça pour moi une bonne fanfiction.

J'ai envie d'en lire plus, et en même temps je sens que c'est parfait comme fin, et que plus ça ferait probablement trop.

Bref, en gros, j'ai adoré, tout était parfait pour moi. La seule critique que je pourrais faire c'est que...

- ouais, ben non, j'en trouve vraiment aucune en fait. .

En tout cas bravo, c'est vraiment une très bonne fanfiction.

Et merci pour ce magnifique moment de lecture~

Bonne continuation.
Effervescent-Kei-Chan chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Awesome story ) I love Sasuke and Naruto together, and even though we only had glimpses of how these two were before "the incident" it was enough. How Sasuke showed he cared, was enough. Ahh! It was so sweet i could hug them both! x) Thanks for sharing!
Annoying Little Twit chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Wow. I love this a lot! Very very believable, and I love the characterizations. Good work here!

ALT
Skyrere chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
powerful.

:)
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
nice take on the real world version of kyuubi.
monel.bed chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
depressing but cute
Narue-Nara-chan chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I love you. I came here after reading why you don't write PWP... I thought that the plot was funny as an exaggeration and it would be hard to put together in one chapter/fic. You made it and you got me hooked. Again.

I have to thank you fo writing such a fun fic: Thank you!
xSakuraBlossom chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Yeah, this could definitely be part of a larger fic. Would be really, really interesting, seeing as this is AU and all, and would have a ton of background there... but you said you wouldn't write it, and so I won't beg xP

Actually, if I ever get past the writer's block stopping me from writing my own fics, could I try a hand at this? No promises about quality, nor any promises about getting it out in a timely fashion, but I'd really like to see this world written out. (I'd probably butcher it and make it way, way simpler than it should be, but I'd still like to try...)

Um. In any case... This was quite well written, I found that they were in character even if they weren't in their own world... And I kind of liked the ending, more because rather than despite the open-ended nature of it. I enjoyed reading it, even if it did put the characters in rather bad situations. (I tend to like angst like that... o.O)

Great job, keep writing~
T. F chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I really enjoyed this!
Cereal-Killa chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
To say this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read is an understatement! Wow, this was just really awesome. Great job!
sunshinelexi chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
This is one of the best SasuNaru/NaruSasu oneshots I have ever read. The idea was so creative, the writing was unique and refreshing, and Sasu and Naru were perfectly IC. I love it!
muumuu122 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
wow, this is awesome
SerialAuthor chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
عندما قرأت هذه القصة كنت مثل "يا غربة". فقط بسبب ميناتو التوأم الشرير الشر. وخطف ناروتو. شخص يحتاج إلى ركلة الحمار Kyubi ، وأنا على أمل أن بوبا ، Kyubi قريبا أن لم خلية في السجن ، فهل للجميع. حسنا ، لن يكون هذا النوع من الركل سنقوم يتوقع لها أن تكون.

ولكن هذا كان حقا باردة.

Arabic
DeathsDragon chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Nice one again my friend, _

I was a little unsure on this one, but i was also stuck on a train, so i thought i'd have a go anyway. you really do have a way of writing that sucks you you for this story, keep writing!
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