Reviews for The Other Side Of Him
Guest chapter 19 . 8/5/2013
I agree with the user 'WiseOldSoul'. I also think their relationship should be more detailed at the end.
Motherof8 chapter 19 . 7/11/2013
Really enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing it
Motherof8 chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
About time. And Bella over thinks things too much. Usually it's Edward who does
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 7/11/2013
So not used to this angsty Edward. Lol
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 7/11/2013
Wow, first time I ever read an Edward character asking for help to get Bella. Lol
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
Wow, what a surprise. Wish Bella had more self confidence
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 7/11/2013
I think Bella should run
WiseOldSoul chapter 19 . 6/29/2013
this was a cute story and enjoyed reading it, however,

the last chapter was a bit hurried esp the last BPOV.
i would have enjoyed it more if it slowed down a bit, perhaps another
chapter with Edward and Bella discussing their future from EPOV as well as BPOV
would have given us a better prospective about how they felt about one another
and their future since they lived so far away.

the sentence where Bella mentions she and Edward loving each other ("We're still together. And we love each other"), i had to think for a moment to figure out when they professed their love for each other then realized, they never had in the story, yet here Bella makes this comment. That is soooo important the part where these two tell each other their first "i love you", i am surprised it was not in the story...
unless i missed that part completely somehow?...
then the last part where Bella hurriedly talked about their future was too quick and without all of the necessary emotions such as nervousness, hope, excitement, love, etc needed
in Bella/Edward stories...

all in all, the story was a good read but the ending was somewhat disappointing, not in its content but on execution...
Beautiful Blood Red Roses chapter 9 . 12/24/2010
! :) Soo happy. Sorry about earlier, but Tanya/Edward gets me cranky. Hee hee. :)
Beautiful Blood Red Roses chapter 6 . 12/24/2010
This doesn't really make any sense. Why would any man date a woman he didn't like? It's not realistic. But I still LOVE THIS STORY! :)
kmfroggi chapter 19 . 12/11/2010
this was really really cute! thanks for writing and sharing!
twiloverwithabigimagination chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
Hey sorry i didnt sign in before i read this.

Anywho! I loved it!

Good chapter!

xXSqueakXx chapter 19 . 9/16/2010
Aww... so sweet!

Lots of love,


Team Edward
Butterflies-LastForever chapter 19 . 9/13/2010
BoOkSaReMyLyF chapter 19 . 8/30/2010
this story has it ALL! romance, drama, hurt & adventure! YAY! SO COOL! Edward is AWESOME! AND IS BELLA! AND ALICE! AND EMMETT! AND JASPER! AND ROASLIE! and well actually i dont really like Tanya especially when she said "But do you really think you have a shot with Edward?" She laughed even louder. "You know I love you, but Edward doesn't seem interested in me, do you really think he'd want to date you?"

I was like U BITCH!SLUT!MEANEY!POO HEAD! yer but anyway i thought that was low! so i dont really like her! but the story was really good anyway! :)
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