|Reviews for 24 looks good on you|
| jk chapter 3 . 11/1/2015
she doesn't speak his name? ummm that's fuckin stupid...seriously what the fuck is the difference saying Edward or him or he...same fuckin difference...lets not be stupid writer I know a lot of fics have bella all pussy...I don't speak his name...I hate that
hes like Voldemort...he who must not be named
| jk chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
I think bella shouldn't even be thinking of his stupid ass...she says his name in her sleep? after 6 years? YAAA RIGHT shes human she'd be over his stupid ass by now...he fucking broke up with her she wouldn't still be holding on to his ass
| jk chapter 15 . 10/3/2015
that was pretty much the worst lemon ever
| jk chapter 14 . 10/3/2015
hahaha eliabeth alice rose? LOL she names her kids after people that ditched her without daying good bye?HZHHAHAHAHAHAH
then she throws herself at Edward without even knowing that he wants her! SO FUCKING PATHETIC
| jk chapter 13 . 10/3/2015
just when I thought she couldn't be more pathetic...she grabs onto Edward begging him not leave her!
jesus...I hate your bella sooooo pathetic! move the fuck on already you stupid whore
| jk chapter 11 . 10/3/2015
maybe bella should find Danica and leave the kids with her...you want my life whore? my hudband? might as well take the kids too!
| jk chapter 10 . 10/3/2015
like we want to read about jake and some blond bimbo...and his kids are all oh shes sooo pretty you should see her dress...blah...bellas kids are fucking little traitors!
| jk chapter 3 . 10/3/2015
why in the fuck would she name her kids with jake after Edward and his mother? that doesn't even make sense! and misses I don't speak his name...except in my sleep cause I'm super fucking pathetic!
why make bella so stupid? when he left he told her that he didn't want her so why in the hell would she name her kids after him? why would she pine over him for SIX YEARS? it makes no sense!
| shyshell21 chapter 34 . 1/7/2014
I was just reading your story and was wondering if you will finish it? I really enjoyed reading it and I was curious how it will end:)
Thank you for sharing your story,
| Speedyraider chapter 20 . 6/25/2013
i have missed your I want looking for it this morning and found it reread it and love it all over again please say you'll update soon
| Lady Elena Bella Petrova chapter 34 . 2/5/2012
Love this chapter and story so far! hoping to read more!
| ruletheworld27 chapter 28 . 6/8/2011
story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2! story 2!
| ClumsyShopaholic chapter 34 . 3/26/2011
omg i love the story so far and cant wait to read the next chapter! I think the girls name should still be Renesmee carlie cullen and the guys name should be anthony emmet cullen...cant wait to read the next chapter so pls udate, i know its been ages but i really want to know what happens next! xoxo
| karencullen2007 chapter 15 . 3/17/2011
Damn hot sex, I want edward to take care of JACOB!
| Live-Life-Louder chapter 34 . 12/26/2010
For a girl: Abbigale Grace, Shelbii Lynn, Carson Blake, Riley Grace, Lindsy Ray
For a boy: Carter James, Carson Blake, Carson Anthony, Stefan James, Damon Michael