Reviews for First Love Lost
Guest chapter 17 . 3/7/2013
But didnt she drop him off at home in a previous chapter? So she would have known that he lived in a big house.
dbpbatm chapter 26 . 3/9/2013
This was a great read! Thank you for sharing it.
reindrops chapter 26 . 2/28/2013
I love the way you write. Needless to say, I fell in love with the story, although both of them have issues and are so wrong for each other at the moment. I also love how you ended both POVs. The last lines in italic made me smile.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/3/2013
lol I was obviously supposed to read this fic, my english class just finished on anthem
71star chapter 17 . 1/29/2013
This story is blowing me away!
I'm all twisty turny and root for Jasper, then he's an ass and I want her to be w/ someone else... But James is still giving bad vibes...
Maybe Mike? Haven't seen him yet...
Gotta finish reading...
grlash chapter 21 . 1/25/2013
Crap. This just about broke my heart
lindsaydrumm chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
Let me just say that, as a therapist, this is one can of worms Esme and Carlisle should have left unopened. I know its fiction, blah, blah, blah, but I work with real kids who have been in this situation and there is no good that comes from "being honest" in such a way. So this review is for your readers who troll through reviews in case anyone has thought of coming clean in such a manner. Not a great idea.

ps. I love your stories ;-) back to read more now.
Luna Magic17 chapter 26 . 11/6/2012
I normally don't really care for the all human stories but this one was great. The characters were realistic and I enjoyed the gradual shift in the relationship between Jasper and Bella. This was terrific.
Ray87 chapter 26 . 11/3/2012
Love story can't wait to read part 2
Ezzy658 chapter 26 . 10/14/2012
First story I read in which they are human!
I like that Emmett was her brother, but men Charlie was odd to me haha

The whole James/Charlie cellphone thing caught me by surprise just like how Jasper's POV is so different from Bella's!

Thannk goodness you have a sequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Dis is so 'wow'...luv'd it
ScaryAsianVampire chapter 26 . 8/11/2012
LOVE this story! for some reason i love messed up Jaspers :)
alanneau2 chapter 22 . 7/24/2012
Pretty sure this is my second reading of your devastating story and I am just as affected as I was the first time.

Brilliant insights into motivation, feelings and destructive relationships.

Best regards, Ann in SC
nikkicullen10 chapter 26 . 7/23/2012
Wow what a story...gotta check out the sequel
Just like with your other story (don't beat me if i don't have the title exactly right), Conversations with my Killer; you took me into a story that I've never experienced before. You are an amazing writer, if you ever decide to publish anything you got a fan right here. Thanks again for an amazing ride
Guest chapter 11 . 7/20/2012
loved it :)
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