|Reviews for Christmas Sucks Two|
| anon chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
someone else may have said this, but you switch between third and first person (very confusing). It is clear that this is not beta'd
| SilverGreen98 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Err..not too sure about this one. The prequel was better, and much more believable.
I'm sorry, but the constant change of POV just bothered the hell out of me.
| Drarry Lover chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Wonderful story. A keeper just like the first.
| ScreamForSOH chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Great story, the only problem with this is there keeps being a point of view slip, between Draco and third person.
| mariah chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
not to be a meanie or anything, but you said you had a beta, but there were still lots of mistakes in the story, both grammatical and canonical. when writing a story, look up words from the harry potter universe to make sure you're correctly using them. for example, "apperate" is wrong, its Apparate. its not much difference, but makes me question how much of a fan you are of the series. i think i wouldve appreciated the story more without those mistakes, so dont be discouraged and keep growing as a writer :)
| njferrell chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Who was the father? What curse? Plus, after that day, the next day should go so much better. Plus, Draco should tell Narcissa to get over it or she can go to hell. She just ruined her chance to get to know her granchild.
| thrnbrooke chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Wonder who the father is? And what irreversible curse?
| PainfullyPassive chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Very cute, a little fluffy with just the right amount of angst. Great story!