Reviews for The Flaw
MrsPeelWe'reNeeded chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
A great story. Very good.
pronker chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Your story was a fine recap of all the prequel movies, neat, and your spelling was good. If you'd want to conclude with maybe a tie-in to your lead paragraph, one sentence maybe with Obi-Wan's concluding thoughts of regret, perhaps, that would encapsulate your story. Hzppy writing!