|Reviews for Concentrate on a memory, and you end up alone|
| TwilightWriter1234 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
You should continue ! I really like it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
| ScarletReid chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
IM CRYING! DAMN YOU! JK!BUT STILL IM CRYING!
| BrEnDUHH chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
wow that was really moving, but i thank god that i didn't cry. i was looking for something really dep and it took a while until i found yours; really good. maybe it wouldn't be a bad idea to continue it and making it more than a one shot.
| E chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
| just me 33333 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
that was very good writing
| Mizz Twilight chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
| rosalie123 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
i almost cried :'(
| Shooks chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Aww very heartfelt ']
Didn't cry though. Faulty tear ducts ]
Write more goddammit! And read 'Past and Present' (EVERYONE) It's amazing D
Don't forget to check spelling/making sense-ness.
| MAGGIE chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
HUH ME EST CONFUDLUMES PLEASE EXPLAIN
| FireKisses chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
aw! That's so sad. I probally would have been crying but all my tears went to the movie i just saw- little women. Great story! That would have been such a tragedy if that really happened in the book. :D
| mahsacullen chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
i have to say this is amazing,but i can't stop crying!
| XxShellxX chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
omg that is so good and sad all at the same time it made me so sad :'(
| Lux chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Lol that was soo horrible in a nice but still horrible way lol.
nothing ever makes me cry, ever! and that made me teary, nice job...sorta.
i know how he feels haha
keep writting! nicer stuff tho haha
also i think listening to maydayparade miserable at best at the same time, may have helped the semantic field of pain and heartwrenching sorrow.
| Welcometohell chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
You made me cry! :*(
Amazing story. Simply... Stunning. Yeah I am still crying hehe