Reviews for Concentrate on a memory, and you end up alone
TwilightWriter1234 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
You should continue ! I really like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Ok
ScarletReid chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
IM CRYING! DAMN YOU! JK!BUT STILL IM CRYING!
BrEnDUHH chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
wow that was really moving, but i thank god that i didn't cry. i was looking for something really dep and it took a while until i found yours; really good. maybe it wouldn't be a bad idea to continue it and making it more than a one shot.
E chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
.!
just me 33333 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
that was very good writing
Mizz Twilight chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
AWE
rosalie123 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
i almost cried :'(
Shooks chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Aww very heartfelt ']

Didn't cry though. Faulty tear ducts ]

Write more goddammit! And read 'Past and Present' (EVERYONE) It's amazing D

Don't forget to check spelling/making sense-ness.

x
MAGGIE chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
HUH ME EST CONFUDLUMES PLEASE EXPLAIN
FireKisses chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
aw! That's so sad. I probally would have been crying but all my tears went to the movie i just saw- little women. Great story! That would have been such a tragedy if that really happened in the book. :D
mahsacullen chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
i have to say this is amazing,but i can't stop crying!
XxShellxX chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
omg that is so good and sad all at the same time it made me so sad :'(
Lux chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Lol that was soo horrible in a nice but still horrible way lol.

nothing ever makes me cry, ever! and that made me teary, nice job...sorta.

POOR EDWARD!

i know how he feels haha

ouch lol

keep writting! nicer stuff tho haha

also i think listening to maydayparade miserable at best at the same time, may have helped the semantic field of pain and heartwrenching sorrow.

gd luck

Lux
Welcometohell chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
You made me cry! :*(

Amazing story. Simply... Stunning. Yeah I am still crying hehe