Reviews for A Surprise from the Shadow King
notafangirl2 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Oh, it so nice to read about Tamaki and Kyoya being just friends. I don't see the point of them as a pairing. They will never be a couple if the fans haven't read the end of the manga.
automailmechanic chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
aw! that was adorable! I didn't see any OOC moments-it was a perfect christmas story, thanks for sharing!-by the way, grammar and sentences and all that jazz impress me! great job! XD
DigitalPocketMimi chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
that was kawaii
Gaelic Lover chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I was expecting something more than that. I felt as though you had built up this suspense and then it was an anti-climax. I don't mind OOC-ness as I believe that sometimes authors portray the characters as how they see and understand them. Sometimes they expand the characters and help them grow more than what is seen in the show or manga. A good first effort, I hope you'll experiment more )