Reviews for Abducted
Gigi Esmeralda chapter 4 . 8/8
That was astonishing! Beautiflly written! Congratulations! I'm glad Holmes was warm and tender towards Watson's feelings. Love is the greatest sentiment ever!
QuietChatterbox08 chapter 4 . 2/11/2016
i can see from the comments that im not the first person 2 tell u this, but your story's awesome 'n i totally enjoyed it :)
i really like stories that show a vulnerable side of SH & u wrote out the chemistry between SH&JW really well
my fav. part was that monologue of JW after he kissed SH's forehead. boy, do i love impulsive actions born out of love
tripleransom chapter 4 . 4/14/2015
I've told you before, but it could stand to be said repeatedly - I'm so glad that you were finally able to finish this!
asd chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
I love this story, though I always feel very disturbed while reading Watson taking advantage of the situation.
sandia.spring chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
I'm so delighted to see that you finally finished this story! I downloaded it a couple of years ago and loved only regret is that it isn't 28 chapters long, but then, I'm crazy for h/c when it comes to Holmes & Watson. Thanks for finishing this-I'm really glad I checked up on it again!
Wee chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
Great story, I really liked it! Wellwritten and cute. Poor Holmes, but I'm glad they found each other in the end! Good job!
Ersatz Einstein chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
Aw, you're ending it? I was hoping that this would continue for a few chapters more. Still, I'm glad that it has been concluded. I was starting to think you'd abandoned it. Anyway...
You're a little inconsistent with tenses ("were shouting" and "ricocheted" in the same clause was jarring), and occasionally modern turns of phrase slip through ("get sent"). While I understand that complex sentences and the passive voice are not so evil as English teachers would have you believe, and lend a sense of maturity and antiquity to writing, you overuse both, with the result that sometimes the later clauses of a sentence don't match the earlier ("see through my pretense, or... know" makes no sense).
That said, the tone is appropriate, particularly in the last scene. The bits of humor in it reminded me heavily of "The Adventure of the Abbey Grange." Frankly, for all my stylistic nitpicking, my only real problem with the fic is how quickly it ended.
Jenasus chapter 3 . 7/12/2013
Wow! Love this story. Are you going to finish it? Would be thrilled to read more.
I'm Nova chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
Love this whole-heartedly.
I'm greedy, so hoping for more.
beargirl1393 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Update please!I can't wait to see how happy Holmes will be when he finds out Watson loves him, and how Watson convinces him that he doesn't care about Holmes' injuries
RazMaKaz chapter 3 . 11/26/2012
Beautiful. I would urge you to continue!
Ersatz Einstein chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
I really love this story, and I've been following it for a couple of months. (True, I'm not a fan o the sex thing, but your writing is excellent.) When will you be getting back to it?
inuyashaxkagome321 chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
This story is really good! Poor Sherlock! Please update soon!
sherrilyn chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
pleeeeeeeeaase, elenaC? please go on with this story...your story is to me what the seven percent solution is to holmes: i can't go without it...
LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books chapter 3 . 9/17/2012
gasp! nooo, great story! still doing the next? Pleeaseee!
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